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Killer Rain

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I believe that a mind is a powerful tool a human has and one should sharpen it by constant use.

As the rain pours down

My heart feels like it's drowned

Hoping that someone can pull me up

From the ocean of loneliness

But Rain keeps me on dragging

And My thoughts are sinking


"You are hopeless no matter what!"

A voice from somewhere

I looked and looked

There! found it, It's on my mind

Wondering why it speaks to me like that

It was the cause of wanting me to be dead


As you pour down so heavily

Ah, Rain, kills me softly

"I can charge you with a crime!"

I want to say this

"But I like how this rain kills me down"

Stabbing me softly with a knife of loneliness

Venting my sadness in the rain

Venting my sadness in the rain

© 2020 Bambe

Comments

Bambe (author) from Philippines on August 25, 2020:

That's a great encouragement for me, Robert. Thanks a lot.

Robert Sacchi on August 24, 2020:

Nice poem a great start in HubPages. Congratulations.

Vikkie on August 02, 2020:

I love rains...it bothers no one...it gives happiee feel only

Merlen from Cebu, Philippines on July 22, 2020:

I love rain

Satya on July 19, 2020:

I love your poem.

But I don't want you to be sad because you are alone.

Yes, the rain keep drowning you deep inside sea of loneliness.

May be Sometimes you have to look for the answers deep inside sea. Not outside.

I hope you that oneday you will go deeper inside the sea and realise that you are beautiful mermaid.

Bambe (author) from Philippines on July 19, 2020:

Thank You for your appreciation..

Upendrashyam sonekar on July 19, 2020:

Deep and lovely poem.There is something about the way you put down your words. So magical.

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