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I Feel Happy When It Rains

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I Feel Happy When It Rains


When the clouds are crying

Shouldn’t I be crying too?

When winds are blowing

Shouldn’t I be gloomy too?


But I feel happy when it rains


When thunder strikes

When the clouds weep

When it lets go

of all it holds within


I feel happy when it rains


The sunshine after the storm

The smile after the cry

To let go is hard

But after it’s done

The rainbow shines

I shine


I feel happy when it rains

I feel happy to let go

Let go of days

not mine anymore


~by me

© 2020 AngelaJJ

Comments

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on July 06, 2020:

Rains rejuvenate life.

AngelaJJ (author) on July 06, 2020:

Thanks guys :)

Hari Prasad S from Bangalore on June 11, 2020:

amazing thoughts.

Miebakagh Fiberesima from Port Harcourt, Rivers State, NIGERIA. on June 06, 2020:

Hi, thanks for sharing such a naturally rich poem. I feel transported.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on June 06, 2020:

Beautifully expressed. Loved the last verse.

Fin from Barstow on June 05, 2020:

nice...good metaphor...pleasant rhythm...sharp images.

Jim Henderson from Hattiesburg, Mississippi on June 02, 2020:

Excellent. Succint but well-stated. "I feel happy to let it go" I'm not going to try to cloud this up with my clumsy summary.

AngelaJJ (author) on June 02, 2020:

thank you for the kind works Lorna!

Lorna Lamon on June 01, 2020:

I love the title of this poem and how it relates to letting go. Beautiful.

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