I Name You Diamond -- A Love Poem
I Name you Diamond
Hard and rigid
You stand
Against fire and wind
Immovable
A rock among men.
I name you diamond
Clear and brilliant
Your face
Reflecting the sun
Pure and sure
Lightness shines through.
I name you Diamond
Gem of gems
You compete
With no one.
Rare and unfound
A miner's delight.
But ...
When I am near you
Your brilliance explodes, and
I am blinded
With love
And pierced
With longing.
I am cut down
To nothing
And wait.
Come hold me
In your strength
And dance with me
Through the caves
Of our universe.
Lover As Inanimate Objects
Comparing a lover to an inanimate object is nothing new. Men have been doing this for years. Some may argue that doing so is a great compliment to the loved one. Others may argue that comparing a man or woman to an "thing" objectifies them, and is harmful to the loved one.
This poem compares a lover to a diamond. Shakespeare compared a woman's beauty to a rose whose beauty would eventually fade in "Sonnet 54." Edmund Muller, a writer from this same period, also compares his prospective lover to a rose in the poem, "Song." Giving a compliment to the woman was often meant as a way to coax her to give away her favours.
A blazon was a particular poetic technique used during the 17th century. The blazon named off parts of the woman's body, like a catalogue, and use various metaphors or similes to compare them. An example of this technique is used by Edmund Spenser in his "Sonnet 64", and Shakespeare turns the convention on its head with his poem, "My MIstress' Eyes Are Nothing Like the Sun."
Woman Poets
Women Writing Love Poems
Women writing love poems is a relatively rare thing in the world of literature. Traditionally, men wrote the poems and the women were the objects of their poems: their muses. So, the occasion of a woman writing a poem is much more rare. It implies a boldness and an initiative that would be considered more "male" in traditional thinking.
There are some note-able exceptions, however and it is interesting to examine some of these examples:
- Anne Bradstreet, a Elizabethan Puritan woman was a famous poet who, among her other works, also wrote poems to her husband. Her love poems are quite chaste and proper but show the emotion of a woman very attached to her lifelong partner.
- Emily Dickinson, who is well-known for her reflections on nature and death, also, surprisingly wrote a few love poems. She is rumoured to have been in love with a judge but she never married him. Her poems display a sense of intense longing and passion.
- One of the most famous love poems in the English language was written by a woman. The poem is "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways." by Elizabeth Barret Browning. This literary dynamo was married to another famous poet, Robert Browning, and it seemed the two of them burned brightly in their love and creativity.
- Finally, a modern example. Maya Angelou, is perhaps the most well-known poet of our day and age. Her poems speak of justice, and women's issues and love. Her poem, "When You Come," is a response to seductions offered by an old flame. "When you come ... " she says, "I CRY." She is not excited at the prospect of love offered, but instead turns away, rejecting the falseness of it.
Questions & Answers
Comments
AUTHOR@Jodah, so true! Thanks for the tip about the Gold Award ... I was not even aware of any award ... I will have to look into that. And yes, you don't often see poems praising a man, but why not? Have a wonderful evening and sorry for the delayed response.
A very good poem and hub overall. It isn't often you read a poem comparing a man to an inanimate object..women are often compared to flowers etc so it is only fair. Great facts about the women writers/poets too. Congratulations on the Gold Award. I found your work through that.
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Tym, I will e-mail you for more details. I appreciate you thinking of me. I apologize for the long delay in replying. I have been working out of town, without a keyboard to write on. Thanks!
Hello if i may ask i would like to use your poem for an intellectual project, may I have your name?
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Awww, thank you so much, Faith Reaper. I am glad you enjoyed the poem and blessings to you, as well, my sister. Take care!
Exceptional poetry dear one. Then with the added history on women poets, just brilliant. Really loved this one.
God bless Voted Way Up to the Heavens
In His Love, Faith Reaper
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MsDora, I appreciate your very insightful comment so much. Yes, there is so much strength in a diamond that perhaps we don't notice, because of the beauty. Thanks for this!
I love that you focused not on the beauty but on the strength of the diamond. Potent reflections on poets and poetry. Thanks!
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Tonipet, thank you so much for your appreciation. I am so honoured that you enjoyed. Have a wonderful day!
Great comparison. I'm no good with poems but I appreciate the thought of every poem... naturally deep and enchanting. Gentle yet powerful, short yet deep. Amazing. Lovely piece prairieprincess.
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@Teaches, thank you so much! Yes, a diamond is so valued because it really does not compare to anything else. And that is a lovely interpretation of the poem: that trials make a woman better. Thanks again for your insight. Take care.
You have a great way with words and I love your added history on women and poems. I love Elizabeth and Robert Browning's poems. A diamond is the most beautiful stone and it's brilliance is beyond compare. It does teach us how women throught life's trials can become a gem.
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f, thanks for noticing that imagery. That's a great observation. I appreciate your comments!
Well written poem and good use of language. The line about being pierced in relation to the diamond seems to convey the effective idea of a brilliant stud embedded in an earlobe. But of course you are a former English teacher!
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Mckenzie, thank you so much. It's so nice to meet a fellow Emily fan. Take care!
Loved your Poem .. that Diamond Man sure woos a woman's heart! Enjoyed how you wove the Great Women of Poetry into the hub. I love Emily Dickinson too!
Voted Up and Awesome!
Mekenzie
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CM, thank you! I am so glad I was able to introduce you to some new writers. Take care.
Very good Hub, there are a few names I have discovered here that I will surely read.
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MsDora, thank you so much. Such kind and encouraging words. I am a huge fan of Emily Dickinson, especially.
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MsDora, thank you so much. Such kind and encouraging words. I am a huge fan of Emily Dickinson, especially.
I'm happy for you, experiencing such powerful love. Your admiration of the women poets you mentioned is paying off. Voted on most bars.
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Eiddwen, thank you so much for reading my poetry and your vote of support. Have a wonderful day!
A great hub which I thoroughly enjoyed and so a vote up here.
Take care and I wish you a wonderful day.
Eddy.
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Ocean, I respect your work very much, and your compliment means a lot. Thank you and take care.
Hi Prairieprincess, this is beautiful, and may be one of my favorite poems I have read so far on Hubpages. Thank you so much for sharing it. It is very lovely and wonderful.
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Stephanie, thank you so much for your kind comment! I appreciate your feedback so much. And wasn't Elizabeth's poem wonderful? It is so eloquently written. That's so cute that you used to quote it all the time! Take care.
I loved the comparisons in this poem - most of us would never think of our lover as a diamond, but it's wonderful! I smiled when I read about Elizabeth Barret Browning. When I was a teenager, I memorized "How do I Love Thee?" and quoted it endlessly. I thought it was the romantic writing I had ever heard. Thanks for sharing your poetry and your insights.
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WD, you are so kind. I love that you recognized this as curriculum because I am a teacher by trade and I try to make my teaching as interesting and engaging as possible. And I agree that this is the best way to teach - through the heart as well as the mind.
WD, you are such a blessing. Take care!
It is a teaching, a lesson. Too much curriculum is dry and boring. From my experience, People get their masters thesis published as a textbook. They have no real experience in their field. The poetry is engaging. It communicates more emotionally than prose. Open the heart, and the mind opens closely behind. Great piece of work. We should have more lessons structured this way in school.
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Blaise, thank you so much. Take care!
Absolutely beautiful.
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@WD Curry, thank you! I had not thought of it as curriculum but thank you! Have a good night.
@lyricwriter, from someone who writes lyrics, I take that a wonderful compliment. Thank you SO much! Take care.
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Ann, thank you so much! You are so kind!
up, useful, and beautiful. Wow, what a great poem:) Emily is a great poet. I have always enjoyed her poetry. I like the structure of your poem. Very beautiful. Good stuff.
This is the most beautiful curriculum I have ever seen.
very good - I've voted it up and stuff.
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@Rosemary, me too! Emily Dickinson is my favourite. Thanks so much for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed it!
@Lambervant, thank you! Nice to see you again! Take care.
Your love poem is brilliant prairieprincess. Really enjoyed your background essay on how different English speaking poets have treated love poetry, and the contributions made by women. Regards, snakeslane
Bravo!
What a great hub
I do love to read Emily Dickinson and Elizabeth Barret Browning. Jane Austen too wrote the odd love poem.
I enjoyed reading your hub
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