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I MISS THE OLD ME!

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There is a wilderness we walk alone However well-companioned Stephen Vincent Benét

There comes a time in your life where you want to relive again! Away from all the hardships and calamities you have faced through out, you just want to take a pause and BREATHE!

This reminds you how beautiful your life was once. I’ve seen people battling stress and failure in love sometimes, but trust me it’s totally alright once you miss the old you and breathe again.



I miss the old me

In deep shadows of darkness

When I sit alone

I miss the old me

When things become disparate

And the feelings drown

I miss the old me

Snubbing my presence,

You smushed my world

What wrong have I done?

You gazed quietly, reason still unknown

I miss the old me

May you feel the way I do,

How hard it is to love someone

And get hatred

You shall know

I miss the old me


Comments

YSSavvy (author) from Saudia Arabia on February 28, 2020:

Alright, thanks a lot!

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on February 28, 2020:

This one is posted on poets with a voice.

Sent you a message with the link

YSSavvy (author) from Saudia Arabia on February 21, 2020:

Thanks Brenda! ^.^

I know there must be many people out there who can relate and feel the poem I’ve written.

Okay I’ll post on these links and

Sure you can post too if you like if you’ll be using my name :)

Plus check out my other work too :)

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on February 19, 2020:

This is a touching, heartfelt poem.

I miss the old me is something I can relate too.

Nice write.

You may post your work here

I also have a group you can post in.

Feel free to post in a new group i created.

Sparklecity Poetry Group. You can post on Sparklecity Poetry Group

https://www.facebook.com/groups/1017041218668840/

Also if I see one I want to post may I post it?

On a page called poets with a voice?

https://www.facebook.com/poetswithavoice/

YSSavvy (author) from Saudia Arabia on February 12, 2020:

Thankyou for your kind words, Lorna! :)

Lorna Lamon on February 12, 2020:

There is a real sense of longing within the lines of this beautiful poem. Lovely.

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