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Hot Eyes

I write, read, crochet, sing, and play musical instruments. A sucker for learning.

The weather is cold.

Yet my eyes are hot.

The colder it gets.

The hotter they feel.

The colder you get.

The more my eyes sputter out tears.

© 2020 Denise Joy Padilla


Denise Joy Padilla (author) from Philippines on February 24, 2020:

Thank you much Jason and Lorna.

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on February 23, 2020:

Great poem. It was packed with emotion. Short but well done. I really enjoyed it.

Lorna Lamon on February 23, 2020:

A thought provoking poem - cleverly written Denise. I enjoyed this read.

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