Hopelessly, Forever, Yours
My heart beats fast when you're near me
With every kiss you awaken another part of my soul
You bring out the light I have within myself
The bright light that loves to dance
That part of me that I have kept hidden for so long
Your gentle and kind ways have opened my heart
You crushed that tear stained chain into a million pieces
The way you look at me has ignited a fire in me I thought was gone
I never thought I would ever feel this way again
You've introduced me to happiness again
Our bodies together are magic
Every intense encounter brings me closer to heaven
I'm hopelessly, forever yours
Comments
Beautiful and romantic :)
Hello, Mary,
Your verse speaks volumes to those of us who feel that way about our life partners. Superb. It goes beyond simple romance, as the average person may think of it: it is actually completing the missing part that makes us whole.
Such are my feelings toward my wife: my biggest fan, my angel of compassion and tenderness, and when necessary, my champion. Occasionally, she's my toughest critic because she wants to see me shine.
Mary, you put into verse what so many married couples truly feel about each other" We want to brighten the universe for the other half of who we are.
Exquisitely done.
Thank you for such a beautiful work.
(My wife just read it and loved it, too.)
Much respect and admiration,
Tim
Mary.....You are a true romantic! As one myself, I love this poem. (I also like your profile name!...it's got style!) Keep inspiring us. Peace, Paula
A lovely and most romantic write.
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