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Hopelessly, Forever, Yours


Mary loves being able to tell her story through her words, it allows her the freedom to voice her opinions without being silenced.


My heart beats fast when you're near me

With every kiss you awaken another part of my soul

You bring out the light I have within myself

The bright light that loves to dance

That part of me that I have kept hidden for so long

Your gentle and kind ways have opened my heart

You crushed that tear stained chain into a million pieces

The way you look at me has ignited a fire in me I thought was gone

I never thought I would ever feel this way again

You've introduced me to happiness again

Our bodies together are magic

Every intense encounter brings me closer to heaven

I'm hopelessly, forever yours


Rochelle Ann De Zoysa from Moratuwa, Sri Lanka on March 11, 2019:

Beautiful and romantic :)

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on February 09, 2019:

Hello, Mary,

Your verse speaks volumes to those of us who feel that way about our life partners. Superb. It goes beyond simple romance, as the average person may think of it: it is actually completing the missing part that makes us whole.

Such are my feelings toward my wife: my biggest fan, my angel of compassion and tenderness, and when necessary, my champion. Occasionally, she's my toughest critic because she wants to see me shine.

Mary, you put into verse what so many married couples truly feel about each other" We want to brighten the universe for the other half of who we are.

Exquisitely done.

Thank you for such a beautiful work.

(My wife just read it and loved it, too.)

Much respect and admiration,


Suzie from Carson City on February 08, 2019:

Mary.....You are a true romantic! As one myself, I love this poem. (I also like your profile name!...it's got style!) Keep inspiring us. Peace, Paula

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on February 08, 2019:

A lovely and most romantic write.

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