Helios - A Poetic Expression
I am a day person completely. I feel a bit low after every sunset. This poem is an ode to the sun accentuating its importance in my life.
Magnum strength of force
Gold vermilion purple shine through
For hours I bathe in its hue.
Rather angry he seems at a point
When the day is past half its time
Like a little tadpole I try to smile
Wrinkle my eyes and tears anoint.
Warmth of the early morn
With a cool breeze to comb
My face hands and soul.
The dusk brings a bright red ball
To look at him straight is no easy game
From the corner of my eyes
I try and fail to fathom his holy grail.
Like a mystery with various shades
A presence of the divine fate
He shines and fades every day.
© 2019 Tiyasha Maitra
Comments
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 12, 2019:
Thanks Nithya. Glad you enjoyed it
Nithya Venkat from Dubai on November 12, 2019:
Beautifully expressed, lovely poem.
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 12, 2019:
Thanks so much. I am happy I could create the warmth of our friend through words.
Thanks so much for your encouragement Chris. Means a lot.
Chris Mills from Traverse City, MI on November 12, 2019:
ahh, yes, I feel the sun shining on me as I read. He is forceful, and yet warming, terrifying and a dear friend. You have said it very well in your poem. Lovely words.
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 12, 2019:
Thanks for commenting Manatita. The sun has always inspired and motivated me. The day begins well for me if the sun is smiling.
manatita44 from london on November 12, 2019:
A life-giving view and exquisite piece on a life-nourishing friend and subject. Hail Surya!! Jai Ram!!
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 09, 2019:
Thanks John. Thanks Ogbonnaya. I am glad you liked it.
John Hansen from Queensland Australia on November 09, 2019:
A wonderful poetic description/ode to the Sun. Well done Tiyasha.
Poeticnurse from Nigeria on November 09, 2019:
An awesome and relaxing read indeed.
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 08, 2019:
Thanks so much Lorna. I am glad I could capture the mysterious elements of the sun.
Lorna Lamon on November 08, 2019:
All the mysterious wonders of the sun are perfectly captured in this exquisite poem Tiyasha. A peaceful read.
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 08, 2019:
Thanks Iqra. The sun himself inspired the words. It was fun to write.
Iqra from Pakistan on November 08, 2019:
Restful and relaxing to read...This is a beautifully sweet poem. The imagery as well as the words used were superb...
Tiyasha Maitra (author) from Gurgaon on November 07, 2019:
Thanks Lora. The idea came to me yesterday when I was once again unsuccessfully trying to look at the sun directly. I have always loved closing my eyes and feeling the rays against my skin.
Lora Hollings on November 07, 2019:
Ah, the sun! How absolutely awesome it is. It is hard to even fathom what a miracle it truly is and your poem indeed captures its grandeur and mystery, Cattaleya. Beautifully done!