Hanging Life
This is the my real life story.By the help of this poem I tried to highlight the worst part of my life .
From childhood till today, I kept sobbing quietly
From the beginning of life, it kept moving towards death
The environment of pain & problems surrounded me like this, o my lord of Fate.
My innocent life kept hanging in the shadows of death.
Childhood is a dawn,it is a happiness town
From mother's soft arm to the courtyard of the house
Flowers of love rain down & decorates my life all around
I also found a lot of love from my mother,relatives & brother.
But the age kept decreasing and the scope of life kept shrinking,
The bad time bound me in such a way,O my Lord Of Fate.
My innocent life kept hanging in the shadows of death
I had expected,I would grow higher than the endless sky
By Struggling,I'll decorate my life with flowers
But wherever i went, a devil was standing in front of my way
My compulsions and helplessness arose a opportunity for them.
Why did i come into the world of these vultures, the question always kept on knocking
How much a life may be complicated,O my Lord of Fate
My innocent life kept hanging in the shadows of death.
Comments
manatita44 from london on March 06, 2020:
Look at some hubs and see what other people are doing
Read the advice that Hubpages is giving you. Send me a link to the hub and I will look at it.
What I am seeing below is a draft. You need to present it well.
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 06, 2020:
Sir if possible then plz. Check it what is wrong in this
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 06, 2020:
Sir but all my story is in draft. What should i do? I have made some correction but inspite this it is unpublished & returned to the draft
manatita44 from london on March 06, 2020:
Looks like Hub Pages has accepted it for something called LetterPile. That's good news. They usually take up to 48 hours before you know what's going on. So it looks like you have made it, with this poem, at least. Lovely!
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 06, 2020:
Respected manatita sir! Plz. accept my humble regards.I hurry i have made some grammar & spelling mistake. I am not very good in English but i made it correct as possible as i can. Inspite of these again the status of my article is draft.
manatita44 from london on March 06, 2020:
Beautiful and passionate piece and yes, we do seek answers. It is not always a bad thing. Our Beloved is always merciful and since you are thinking of him, then that's awesome. Peace.
I have noticed you ask for guidance. Hub Pages like you to include photos, text capsules, polls if you can and a video. This increases your score. Re-read your work for grammar and spelling errors. Write more.
Comment on the work of fellow writers you like and follow them too. Om Shanti!
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 03, 2020:
I mean guide
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 03, 2020:
Respected asereht mam! I am first time on hubpages.com. plz. Gude me
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 03, 2020:
Thanks a lot mam!
asereht1970 from Philippines on March 03, 2020:
Nice poem. Straight from the heart. Here's wishing you strength and faith. Keep living.
Uttamkumar567 (author) from India on March 02, 2020:
I pray for a good life of whole humanity!
