Haiku on Growing Old

Updated on April 13, 2018
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Jamie Lee Hamann
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I can't seem to stop writing poetry or reading poetry. I think it is safe to say I love poetry and I love sharing great poetry with others.

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Haiku on Growing Old

A half buried rock

that holds child's watercolor

through every season


Ponderosa Pine

cone lies on animal path

to remain all year


Sometimes they gather

the hummingbird and squirrel

moments of magic


my damn beard grows long

along with the crabgrass outside

our brown and grey time

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        John Hansen 2 months ago from Queensland Australia

        This is beautiful haiku, Jamie..lovely imagery. I enjoyed it.

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        Doris James-MizBejabbers 2 months ago

        I like it, especially the last stanza. I admire anyone who can write haiku.

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        Ann Carr 2 months ago from SW England

        I like the imagery here, Jamie. Enjoyed it very much.

        Ann

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        Chris Mills 2 months ago from Missoula, Montana at least until August 2018

        Jamie, that is an awesome “one-with-nature” haiku. Thanks for sharing it.

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        Audrey Hunt 2 months ago from Idyllwild Ca.

        Jamie, you are a true poet. I love the flow of this poem. Your last stanza is brilliant!

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        Venkatachari M 2 months ago from Hyderabad, India

        Very good poem portraying the growing older features of both human and nature. Enjoyed it a lot.

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        Verlie Burroughs 2 months ago from Canada

        Love these Jamie, little paintings, and the painting too, so peaceful.

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