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Haiku Poems (Emptiness, Sadness, & Pains)


Comfort and Pain

On soft, white pillows

Gloomy memories relive

Comfort, pain alike.



Deaf, mute and dark rooms

Immensely vast crying wall

Incapable call.



Long, dark empty roads

Have never been, all anew

Cramped, confined , and curbed!

© 2020 RBN Knowledge


RBN Knowledge (author) on May 06, 2020:

Thank you for the feedback. Not a good Haiku writer here , but looking forward to learning more from hubbers' feedback.

Larry Conners from Northern Arizona on May 06, 2020:

Not bad, Ryan, but a bit lacking in resolving the third line with a distinct connectivity to the first and second lines... your articulation is spot on and the imagery provoked provides wonderful clarity and understanding... thank you for these...

RBN Knowledge (author) on May 05, 2020:

I am overwhelmed with all your words. Thank you for the appreciation.

Nathan Bernardo from California, United States of America on May 05, 2020:

I like your poetry. I read your other poem too.

These ones are simple but reach direct to the heart, at all angles.

RBN Knowledge (author) on May 05, 2020:

Thank you for the motivating remarks. Good day!

Demas W Jasper from Today's America and The World Beyond on May 05, 2020:

Keep it going, you are getting there.