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April Haiku #2526

I can't seem to stop writing poetry or reading poetry. I think it is safe to say I love poetry and I love sharing great poetry with others.

what-i-have-been

Fresh Air Haiku

To high altitudes

lift ones spirit into air

breath a long breath


Nap on snowy peak

awaken to song of snow

birds in lodgepole pine


Travel to river

where trout follows its path

reflects above clouds


Some fresh air Haiku

soak in natural Hot Spring

journey in time stops


Near life size boulders

flows a howling water fall

whose mist peppers air


Take off hiking boots

dip toes in frigid river

walk slippery rock


To return one day

today to high altitude

clear until empty


Return to mountain

poetry every five years

never lose my way

© 2021 Jamie Lee Hamann

Comments

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on April 05, 2021:

Beautifully expressed haiku, I enjoyed reading them.

Devika Primić from Dubrovnik, Croatia on April 05, 2021:

The outdoors brings us positive thinking and allows for a healthier lifestyle. I live in the countryside and it is a beautiful environment. This is so true from your Haiku.

Sankhajit Bhattacharjee from MILWAUKEE on April 05, 2021:

great composition!!!

Claudia Smaletz from East Coast on April 05, 2021:

Beautiful, I can feel the quiet and clarity of the mountains.

Ravi Rajan from Mumbai on April 05, 2021:

great haiku verses that help us to breathe in the fresh air of the mountains and the vitality that comes along with it.THanks for the write jamie.

Ann Carr from SW England on April 05, 2021:

Great inspiration from the outdoors and great poetry from you!

I particular like the waterfall 'whose mist peppers air'.

Ann

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