Insomniac: Golden Light

Golden Light

It is midnight
And we were dancing under this golden light
Slowly moving with our unheard music
So proud in our invisible stage

You were so beautiful under this golden light
So impossible for my swaying mind
But with your hypnotizing smile
Darling I am so drowned

I can hear your heart beating
I breathe the air you're breathing
Your touch is burning me
Under this golden light,
You promised to stay by me

The depth of the night affects me
As your presence slowly devoured my sane
I wanted to be with you
Let's dance under this golden light forever

© 2019 Crezyl

Comments

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 17, 2019:

Thank you Kari. I am so blessed to have people like you in my hubs. ♥ God bless you Kari ♥

Kari Poulsen from Ohio on December 17, 2019:

I really like your poems. This has an ethereal quality. Beautiful!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 15, 2019:

Muchas gracias amigo, Manatita. I am very happy. Merry Christmas too ❤

manatita44 from london on December 15, 2019:

An immaculate piece! I am a real fan of your 'terrific' pieces. Buen suerte y feliz navidad!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 13, 2019:

Thank you so much Pamela. ❤ Hearts!

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on December 13, 2019:

Your poetry paints a lovely picture. I enjoyed it very much.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 13, 2019:

Purvi! Thank you so much for your comment. I have a happy heart now ❤ God bless Purvi ❤

Purvi from India on December 13, 2019:

Superb, Crezyl

Your imagination in dancing under golden light is very nice. It's a beautiful poem. I really enjoy this more.

I also like this sentence -

"I can hear your heart beating

I breathe the air you're breathing"

Thanks for sharing it.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

I don't know what makes these golden lights so romantic Ruby. It feels it has magic and I like it. thanks for the comment!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

Thank you Liz! Hearts for you ❤❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

I agree with you Brenda, when that music in out heads play, we move to it unknowingly and that feeling is exceptional.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

Clive even i dance even I don't know how haha. But thank you for reading it❤

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on December 12, 2019:

Beautifully penned, dancing under the light, so romantic.....

Liz Westwood from UK on December 12, 2019:

You paint a vivid picture in this poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 12, 2019:

Crezyl,

This one is astounding.

I can feel the energy and flow of this poem.

I can picture it in my mind.

Sometimes dancing with imaginary music is the best!

Thanks for sharing.

Clive Williams from Jamaica on December 12, 2019:

Very Beautiful and Imaginable. I will dance too.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

Thank you so much John ❤❤

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on December 12, 2019:

A beautiful love poem, Crezyl. Well done.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

Thank you Bill❤

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on December 12, 2019:

Very lovely!