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Give Me More


So wonderful

A beauty we don't always imagine

An air energy drink

No calories

No sugar

No caffeine

A quick pick me up

A light refreshing tickle

A quick lift under our arms

Rolling across our back

Tumbling over and brushing gently against our face

So incredible

Strong gusts come and go

I love it so much

Don't ever leave

Keep giving me breeze after breeze


DREAM ON (author) on October 03, 2020:

There are so many things we can always learn from Mother Earth. A lot of times if we look the other way nature has a way of biting us in the butt. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Happy Saturday.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on October 02, 2020:

I love this one!

Nature does have a calming effect making one believe his day will turn out for the best.

Great write.

DREAM ON (author) on October 02, 2020:

When my whole world seems to be upside down. I reach outside myself and find love in nature. It reminds me of what is important. All we can do is try our best and believe all will fall in place. Wishing you a better day and a fantastic weekend. Thank you for reading and sharing.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on October 01, 2020:

Things here are getting tighter and tighter. Writing jobs elusive, still got over a week and a half till SS kicks in and I tell you I keep working online doing everything and anything hoping eventually it will all payout well. When did things get so hard? Anyway, another weekend is coming and I hope you have a great one,

DREAM ON (author) on October 01, 2020:

Prithviraj Shirole Thank you for being the first person to comment on my poem. I often like the way a breeze works it's magic. It comes sometimes fierce and other times soft and gentle. Each time making us feel a different feeling. I enjoy both with great pleasure. I am happy to see other people enjoy the same pleasures. For me it is like sitting in front of a fan on a hot day. Just keep refreshing me even if it is only for that moment. I hope your day goes well. Have fun and until the breeze comes back again we will both be waiting patiently.

Prithviraj Shirole from India on October 01, 2020:

That was a really creative poem. Definitely, a breeze makes our soul happy.

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