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Genuine Reality

I wrote this one while thinking about relationships within the church and how much they affect others good or bad


Translucent lives... Fragile souls... Desecrated friendships... Not yet made whole... The shattered glass of empty souls...


Opaque minds... Stony hearts... Unknowing of freedom... Which truth imparts... The icy ground of empty hearts...


Transcending Love... Descended low... Given to all... Who want to know... The Glorious Light... Continuous flow...


Open hearts... Receiving souls... Renewed minds... Now made whole... The forgiven state... Of softened souls...



Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on August 01, 2020:

Thank you Brenda! :-)

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on April 28, 2020:

Nice message.

Hopefully they will embrace this experience.

Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on March 10, 2020:

Thanks all for the caring comments. I wrote the poems years ago. I'm going to have to come up with more soon. lol

Mitara N from South Africa on March 10, 2020:

Your message in this poem is presented clearly

Thank you for sharing

Kyler J Falk from California on March 10, 2020:

We all know how I feel about religion already, but I can definitely admire the grace with which you delivered your message. Wonderful poem.

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on March 10, 2020:

Well presented. Thanks.

Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on March 10, 2020:


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