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Genuine Reality

I wrote this one while thinking about relationships within the church and how much they affect others good or bad

genuine-reality

Translucent lives... 
Fragile souls... 
Desecrated friendships... 
Not yet made whole...
The shattered glass of empty souls...

genuine-reality

Opaque minds... 
Stony hearts...
Unknowing of freedom... 
Which truth imparts...
The icy ground of empty hearts... 


genuine-reality

Transcending Love...
Descended low... 
Given to all... 
Who want to know...
The Glorious Light... 
Continuous flow...


genuine-reality

Open hearts... 
Receiving souls... 
Renewed minds... 
Now made whole...
The forgiven state...
Of softened souls...

genuine-reality

Comments

Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on August 01, 2020:

Thank you Brenda! :-)

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on April 28, 2020:

Nice message.

Hopefully they will embrace this experience.

Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on March 10, 2020:

Thanks all for the caring comments. I wrote the poems years ago. I'm going to have to come up with more soon. lol

Mitara N from South Africa on March 10, 2020:

Your message in this poem is presented clearly

Thank you for sharing

Kyler J Falk from Corona, CA on March 10, 2020:

We all know how I feel about religion already, but I can definitely admire the grace with which you delivered your message. Wonderful poem.

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on March 10, 2020:

Well presented. Thanks.

Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on March 10, 2020:

Cool!