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Genuine Reality

I wrote this one while thinking about relationships within the church and how much they affect others good or bad

genuine-reality

Translucent lives... Fragile souls... Desecrated friendships... Not yet made whole... The shattered glass of empty souls...

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Opaque minds... Stony hearts... Unknowing of freedom... Which truth imparts... The icy ground of empty hearts...


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Transcending Love... Descended low... Given to all... Who want to know... The Glorious Light... Continuous flow...


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Open hearts... Receiving souls... Renewed minds... Now made whole... The forgiven state... Of softened souls...

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Comments

Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on August 01, 2020:

Thank you Brenda! :-)

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on April 28, 2020:

Nice message.

Hopefully they will embrace this experience.

Kathryn Collins (author) from UK on March 10, 2020:

Thanks all for the caring comments. I wrote the poems years ago. I'm going to have to come up with more soon. lol

Mitara N from South Africa on March 10, 2020:

Your message in this poem is presented clearly

Thank you for sharing

Kyler J Falk from California on March 10, 2020:

We all know how I feel about religion already, but I can definitely admire the grace with which you delivered your message. Wonderful poem.

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on March 10, 2020:

Well presented. Thanks.

Anya Ali from Rabwah, Pakistan on March 10, 2020:

Cool!

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