Freestyle Haiku

Updated on December 11, 2019
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Tobias and Jasmine
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Freestyle Haiku Written on Tuesday November 26, 2019 Happy readings. Enjoy.

The love in your eyes (5)

fills up the empty void in my heart (9)

sending rapid shock (5)

waves to spread all over my body. (9)

Instantly your name (5)

appears on my body, I surrender, (10)

I surrender to (5)

your hypnotic cologne and warmth smile. (9)

As you have captured (5)

my essence and innocence making me, (10)

wanting me, and needing to sing nothing else (11)

but your love. Your love (5)

is ingrained in my brain all through out the day, (11)

I lay on pink clouds (5)

and I say to myself "This feels like I'm up in heaven". (14)

As I look up, up (5)

right into your eyes I see a love that is divine (13)

to be mine, yes mine (5)

and only mine from the vine, we make wine. (10)

In Conclusion of this Haiku

This Haiku was inspired by my lust for love, fantasy and fairy tales. I can not help that I am a woman who is still a girl trapped in her fantasies. By the way this haiku is not in its traditional standards it starts at 5,9,5-5,10,5-11,5,11-5,14,5-and 13,5,10 at the end of the Haiku.

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Love – Fantasy or REAL?
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    • xoxreneesmithoxox profile imageAUTHOR

      Renee Daniella Smith 

      7 months ago from Canada: Brampton,Ontario

      Ok, I will definitely not do the numbers next time than. Thanks for the suggestion BRENDA ARLEDGE.

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      7 months ago from Washington Court House

      This poem is excellent..(the numbers at the end i know serve a purpose but are a bit distracting)

      I can feel your heartfelt love pouring out...great write.


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