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Anupam, a poet at heart, a passionate learner,& a language trainer is devoted to each and every art. Loves to explore various poetry forms.

Sky

Sky

Endless

As are hopes,

Both give comfort

Even if far fetched;

Both keep changing colours

With varied clouds as obstacles;

Though unknown, huge sky looks like own,

Hidden hopes of heart become alien;

Like sky above can't hopes sojourn within?

Before body stops beating and breathing,

I wish to soar high with the hopes' wings,

Up above in the sky fearless

With the love that heart longs for,

Relishing each moment,

Even if I fall

I'll not complain

Try again

To fly

High.


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You

You

Are mine

That I see;

Do you see me

As your dear darling?

I dream for your company

In a world of you and me;

Where we learn love of life in glee,

And strive to make each other happy,

With pure eternal love of ecstasy.

Whatever's the thought of your fantasy,

Let it not ruin the dream world of mine,

For me you are my destiny,

Your heart beats are calling me,

Rules of society

No more trouble me,

Older I've been

by number

Love's still

young.

Tree

Tree,

Grown seed

With sun light,

Water and air,

Roots buried in soil;

Adapting the seasons,

Heavy rain, hail storm or strong winds,

Nothing stops them from reaching high,

They survive every natural pain

But man kills them for his personal gain.

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Wish

Wish

Nothing,

No rich gold,

No bungalow,

No fame nor limelight,

But simple rural life,

Close to nature, far from crowd,

Where chirps and buzzes can be heard,

In the company of beloved

I wish to breathe rest of life in village.

© 2020 Anupam Mitu

Comments

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on July 01, 2020:

Thank you so much William. I would request you to read my article on "Be yourself, Love yourself & Enjoy yourself" and leave a valuable feedback of yours.

William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on July 01, 2020:

An interesting form of poetry, Anupam. and you di a wonderful job with it. Thank you for sharing.

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 30, 2020:

Thank you Urooj Khan. God bless you dear.

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 30, 2020:

Thank you Flourish. I love to express myself in words but sometimes a bit difficult to take out time for our passion. Love you all.

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 30, 2020:

Thank you so much dear Denise. It's such a privilege to be appreciated by artists like you.

God bless you dear

Dora Weithers from The Caribbean on June 30, 2020:

Interesting! Such a complicated art, in my view, to be so meticulous and have it make sense. Good job!

Urooj Khan from Karachi, Pakistan on June 28, 2020:

Beautifully written.

FlourishAnyway from USA on June 28, 2020:

A unique form of poetry. I especially liked the tree poem.

Denise McGill from Fresno CA on June 27, 2020:

How beautiful your poetry is. You paint beautiful pictures with your words.

Blessings,

Densie

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 27, 2020:

Thank you so much dear Ann. I have tried to use it in both the ways (ascending order).

Love you dear Ruby as you read the poem and got the words from my heart.

Thank you so much John for reading and commenting. Please try. it's really very interesting. Though I am trying all the new forms that I can access. Please share some regional ones that you know.

Oh Laura I am so delighted to read the comment from all of you here, I too enjoy reading your poems and articles. Such extraordinary gems are there at hubpages that I feel blessed.

Lots of love to you too Laura. I have found you as a very positive and encouraging friend in almost all of your poems that I have read and the comments that you have left.

Dear hubbers

Lots and lots of love for you all

God bless you all.

Take care of your overall health

Lorna Lamon on June 27, 2020:

A wonderful collection of words weaved into beautiful poetry. I had never heard of this form which you have mastered. Loved it.

Lora Hollings on June 27, 2020:

I was just enraptured by your imaginative and intricate verse, Anupam. You did an awesome job with this form of poetry! Although they are all beautiful, my favorite is Sky.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on June 26, 2020:

Nice poems, Anupam. Interesting structure too. I will try this form sometime soon.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on June 26, 2020:

I really like this type of poetry, it's new to me. I especially liked ' The Tree ' It tells the complete story of survival in only a few words. Bravo!

Ann Carr from SW England on June 26, 2020:

Lovely poems that go straight to the heart.

I like the pattern this form makes when it is also reversed.

You've said a lot in so few words.

Ann

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 26, 2020:

Thank you dear Ankita! Lots of love

Ankita B on June 25, 2020:

Very nicely written poems Anupam. I personally loved Sky and You.

Anupam Mitu (author) from MUMBAI on June 25, 2020:

thank you Chatra! :-)

CHATRA RAM from BARMER INDIA on June 25, 2020:

Nice!