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Entrancing Sunflowers

Lorna is a published writer with a particular interest in narrative poetry, which she finds therapeutic.

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A soft warm breeze played around my ankles

As my bare feet felt the heat of summer on the well-worn grassy path

The scent of hazy days hung in the air - enticing

I smiled as I came upon you, in the midst of a sea of yellow

Glorious sunflowers whose petals reach out, craving attention


I rushed to join you, to dance amongst you

My carefree limbs twirling as the trace of a breeze kissed my face

I stand and marvel, drinking in your scent, savouring every moment

Experiencing this feeling of endless joy and pleasure

Where the beauty of life is omnipresent in this field of entrancing sunflowers

© 2019 Lorna Lamon

Comments

Lorna Lamon (author) on April 14, 2020:

It is such a wonderful feeling to walk through a field of sunflowers. I was lucky enough to live in Tuscany for a few years and this is one of my favourite memories. We don't have the weather in Ireland to grow these beautiful flowers, however, you also have a lovely memory to cherish. Your comments are always appreciated Peggy. Take care.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on April 14, 2020:

Your poem about sunflowers is captivating. It made me remember the sunflowers that my grandfather used to grow. They always fascinated me how they turned during the day to follow the sunlight with their faces.

Lorna Lamon on March 23, 2020:

Thank you for visiting and for your kind comments Laurinzoscott.

Laurinzoscott from Kanab, Utah on March 22, 2020:

I am very much attached tobypur writing style already...You can paint very vivid pictures with your words...wow

Lorna Lamon (author) on December 01, 2019:

Thank you Denise - I spent some time in Italy and fell in love with Tuscany. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Denise McGill from Fresno CA on December 01, 2019:

This is a lovely tribute to the joy sunflowers bring. Such a happy cheerful flower.

Blessings,

Denise

Kenneth Avery from Hamilton, Alabama on August 02, 2019:

Hi, Lorna: you are most welcome. Thanks too, for the following. I hope and pray that I never publish anything so negative and unclean that you will leave my friendship.

But you please keep up the writing. YOU are fantastic.

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 02, 2019:

Thank you for commenting Dream On and I am glad to have shared the experience.

DREAM ON on August 02, 2019:

I could picture you in the midst of all that beauty. Breathing in the wonderful experience. I was looking at sunflowers at the garden center they are so tall and amazing. I enjoyed your hub very much.

Lorna Lamon (author) on August 02, 2019:

Hi Kenneth Glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for the kind comments. I will check out your HubPage.

Kenneth Avery from Hamilton, Alabama on August 01, 2019:

Dear Lorna . . .outstanding poem. I loved it. And I have published a number of Abstract/Pose poetry that I think would blend in good with your works.

You are welcome to get on my Profile Page and check out a few.

Write anytime.

Lorna Lamon (author) on July 26, 2019:

Thank you Brenda - I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on July 25, 2019:

Wonderful picture in my mind. Thank you, Lorna.

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 30, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments Nithya. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.

Nithya Venkat from Dubai on June 30, 2019:

Beautifully expressed, I was transported to a field of sunflowers as I read your lovely poem.

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 30, 2019:

Thank you for commenting Leonie I appreciate it.

Leonie M from Belgium. on June 29, 2019:

It is a powerful piece of poetry, thanks for sharing.

Asad Dillz Khan from United Kingdom on June 24, 2019:

You're Welcome!

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 24, 2019:

Thank you Asad, I appreciate your comments.

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 24, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments Ashly.

Asad Dillz Khan from United Kingdom on June 23, 2019:

A great painting through words Lora! Lovely poem! Superb Job!

Ashly Christen from Illinois on June 23, 2019:

this captures the feeling and pure joy of the outdoors, of being one with the earth, even if only for a short time

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 22, 2019:

Thank you for your kind comments John - glad you enjoyed the poem.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on June 21, 2019:

You create lovely imagery in this poem which arises our senses, Lorna. Sunflowers are strikingly beautiful and a wonderful subject for a poem.

Lorna Lamon (author) on June 21, 2019:

Thank you Lora, Evie, Liz, Brenda and Pamela for your kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem,

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on June 20, 2019:

I really like this poetry. Sunflowers are so magnificent!

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on June 20, 2019:

Lorna,

You did an excellent job on this piece.

I could feel myself walking down the path towards them.

The words used to describe this were magical.

Great write. Good Read.

Liz Westwood from UK on June 20, 2019:

This is a very atmospheric poem, setting the scene clearly in the reader's imagination.

Evie Sparkes on June 20, 2019:

Just lovely Lorna :)

Lora Hollings on June 20, 2019:

Lorna, this is a beautiful poem using words powerfully to capture the loveliness of the sunflowers and in expressing the joy you felt in being in their presence. You captured the happiness of the moment in your poem. I loved it! Thank you for sharing.