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Whirlpool

Whirlpool


It's my turn,
to endure this intense churn.

The forces are aloof,
to drown me into this whirlpool.

Its my own making,
Its my own doing.

Its feeding on me,
Cause I had been feeding it free.

I need to address it with tact,
to be afloat, infact.


© 2019 Hari Prasad S

Comments

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on September 12, 2019:

Thanks for the visit Tamara. :-)

BBYCGN from Uninhabited Regions on September 12, 2019:

Hari, this poem is mysterious, and has a beautiful rhythm to it. I enjoyed it very much!

Hugs,

Tamara

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 08, 2019:

Thanks Mark. :-)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 08, 2019:

Thanks Ruby. Your way of handling is inspirational. :-)

Mark Tulin from Santa Barbara, California on June 06, 2019:

Cool poem and imagery in this one.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on June 06, 2019:

Sometimes we feel like we're in a whirlpool and churning inside. When I feel like that I try to think of the good things in my life, then the WP slows a bit. Thoughtful poetry.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 04, 2019:

Thank you Eric

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on June 04, 2019:

Again a wonderful poetry. Just packed full is such a short time. So I read it 3 times. It will be in my head all day long.

Eddies have almost killed me a couple of times. Too long for here.