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Dying Rosebud


Dying rosebud

In the mist of a fading morning
Down in the alley of death
I am saving myself
From his utter destruction

His colossal whispers
To his unending blurts of wraths
I care no one, I care for my heart

For he has no heart at all
For he is black inked soul
My demise shall compromise
For my cadaver shall be his prize

I am but I am
I am but weak
I am always trap in his tricks
For my head was a foolish!

I am but a dying rose bud
Young but counting my days
Sound but dying
Happy but sad.

© 2019 Crezyl


Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 26, 2019:

Jason I am so in love with your words. Yes, love will always be like that. It had taught me alot of things and I maybe benefited from it too. My broken heart is the driving force of my emotion, and I guess it happens to you too. I love and broke myself but I never regretted it, I am thankful instead because it had lead me to an amazing and unique experience. Merry Christmas Jason. Thank you always ❤

Jason Nicolosi from AZ on December 25, 2019:

Crezyl, this is a beautifully written poem. Funny how hurt can sometimes bring great things out of us. Like your poetry. Similarly, some of my best artwork was created out of pain from my once broken heart. Like an artist you paint your emotions exquisitely, but with words. You have a wonderful way of translating your hurt into beautiful yet sad messages.

Alfred Tennyson said it best " 'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all." I agree with his quote but it sure sucks being hurt by love. Love is a funny thing. One moment, love can feel amazing and the next it can be the worst pain we have ever felt.

Merry Christmas!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 12, 2019:

Thank you so much Kari ❤ so much love!

Kari Poulsen from Ohio on December 12, 2019:

I love this part "I am but I am". We are what we are and it's hard to change. Wonderful poem!

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 11, 2019:

Kari that is the emotions I have when I was writing that. Thank you so much!

Kari Poulsen from Ohio on December 11, 2019:

Your poem makes me sad, but also resigned. Resigned to a truth that should not be.

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 07, 2019:

Hello Hari! Thank you for reading and understanding my work ❤

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 06, 2019:

Hi Brenda! I've read your comments in my other work. This poem is kind of special, I made it while crying over someone that you're referring to. You really know the feelings of my poems.

Hari Prasad S from Bangalore on December 06, 2019:

A sad realization. Hopefilled. Cool poem.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on December 06, 2019:

Such a sad poem. To be in the midst of someone who who feels nothing.


Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 06, 2019:

Thank you Clive❤

Clive Williams from Jamaica on December 06, 2019:

Nice piece

Crezyl (author) from Philippines on December 06, 2019:

Thank you Chris! It really makes me happy when someone appreciates my work ❤

Chris Mills from Traverse City, MI on December 06, 2019:

I love this. It is sad, but also shows signs of hope. "I care for my heart." It is nice to meet you, Crezyl Sabrido.

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