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Dramatic Writer

Vishw Deepak Jain is a student at Institute of Chartered Accountants of India (ICAI).

Woke up with a silver lining each day,
Hoping he would understand her love one day.

But the writer didn't want them to meet,
And ended the story with a deceit.

But her love was strong enough,
Waking the writer to continue the story wider.

Explained how she died ever night,
Hoping him to be by her side.

But the foolish not know the value he missed,
Something not comparable to any valuable list.

The silver lining continue to exists till today,
When she lies in her bed in heavens bay.

© 2018 Vishw Deepak Jain


Omkar on August 30, 2020:

beautiful poem

Tanu on August 01, 2019:

Excellent and lyrical

Sachin jain on June 14, 2019:

Feeling calm and composed!!!!

Mahendra kumar on April 13, 2019:


Sanjeev yadav on April 09, 2019:

Superb !!!!

Sandeep on September 28, 2018:

Highly lyrical

Sagar bansal on September 20, 2018:

Very nice....

Dalveer on September 09, 2018:

Super and excellent

Sheela jain on September 02, 2018:

The lyric has a perfect finish

prof K. P. Singh on August 30, 2018:

Diction employed by you is embellished but very apt

Prof V K Jain on August 12, 2018:

The poem shows creative and megnatic power of the poet

Sagar on August 07, 2018:

Very dramatic and touching.

Ajay sisodia on August 04, 2018:

A touching piece of art

carriethomson from United Kingdom on June 19, 2018:

Very nice!!!!

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