Vishw Deepak Jain is a student at Institute of Chartered Accountants of India (ICAI).
Woke up with a silver lining each day,
Hoping he would understand her love one day.
But the writer didn't want them to meet,
And ended the story with a deceit.
But her love was strong enough,
Waking the writer to continue the story wider.
Explained how she died ever night,
Hoping him to be by her side.
But the foolish not know the value he missed,
Something not comparable to any valuable list.
The silver lining continue to exists till today,
When she lies in her bed in heavens bay.
© 2018 Vishw Deepak Jain
Omkar on August 30, 2020:
Tanu on August 01, 2019:
Excellent and lyrical
Sachin jain on June 14, 2019:
Feeling calm and composed!!!!
Mahendra kumar on April 13, 2019:
Sanjeev yadav on April 09, 2019:
Sandeep on September 28, 2018:
Sagar bansal on September 20, 2018:
Dalveer on September 09, 2018:
Super and excellent
Sheela jain on September 02, 2018:
The lyric has a perfect finish
prof K. P. Singh on August 30, 2018:
Diction employed by you is embellished but very apt
Prof V K Jain on August 12, 2018:
The poem shows creative and megnatic power of the poet
Sagar on August 07, 2018:
Very dramatic and touching.
Ajay sisodia on August 04, 2018:
A touching piece of art
carriethomson from United Kingdom on June 19, 2018: