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Poems & Poetry About Never, Not Ever Giving Up On Love -Please Believe, I Don't Want To Give Up On Us - We Can Make It

dont-give-up-on-us

Don't give up on us

Before we've even begun

Just because you're afraid

Of things yet to come.

Take hold of my hand

See yourself as I do,

Believe when I say

I've enough faith for two.

Don't trade me for doubt

The doubt is not real,

Besides, it's no match

For the love that I feel.

There is nothing stronger

Than this bond that we share,

Not those who wish to destroy

Or the crosses we bear.

Can stand up against

The magic of us,

We can slay any dragon

And turn it to dust.

Close your eyes to the darkness,

Close your ears to the lies,

Don't let go of my heart,

Happiness is the prize.

Don't give up on us

Because I don't want to go,

You have my heart,

You're half of my soul.

If you tried to make me

I wouldn't be able to leave,

You're as necessary to me

As the air that I breathe.

So don't break my heart,

In this you can trust

I love you forever

Please don't give up on us.

© 2011 Kristen Burns-Darling

Comments

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on April 15, 2012:

@Jade89 - Thank you for the gift of your time and for your gracious comments, they are both welcomed and deeply appreciated!

Kristen

Jade Monique Taylor Hiralal from Johannesburg - South Africa on April 02, 2012:

OMG This is really beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing .

Really amzing

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 23, 2012:

@Ebower - Thank you so much for the generosity of your time and your comments they are both welcomed and deeply appreciated. It is true that once hurt makes most of us twice shy, I am glad that you enjoyed this. I have read a couple of your poems as well, they are absolutely beautiful, and I am looking forward to reading more!

Thanks Again,

Kristen

Erin Bower from Georgia on January 23, 2012:

This was wonderful. Many of us are afraid of loving someone, because we've been hurt in the past. I voted this up and beautiful!

DINGEMZ on October 24, 2011:

DEDICATED TO MY HONEY, I LOVE THIS POEM...

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on April 24, 2011:

@Elisa659 - Thank you for your kind words, I am glad that you enjoyed it!

Elisa659 from Inverness, FL on April 24, 2011:

Thank you for sharing your poem.. My favorite lines-"you have my heart-you're half of my soul.. so beautiful..what an inspiring message.

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on April 20, 2011:

@Prairieprincess - Thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed it. :-)

Sharilee Swaity from Canada on April 20, 2011:

This is so beautiful, and so heartfelt! This poem makes a real statement about love and endurance.

The shorter lines, repetition and rhyme give it a lovely flow and rhythm. Very enjoyable to read!

PR Morgan from Sarasota Florida on January 31, 2011:

You have got to love a poem about love and strength! Very original!

chspublish from Ireland on January 19, 2011:

Thank you for letting us, the reader, take that inner journey there right where you are. Inspiring!

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 18, 2011:

Malin - Thank-you.....Acutally, he didn't. In March we will have been married for 19 years.

Houa Lor - Thank-you, much appreciated, I checked out some of your hubs too, and was impressed, so am now following you as well.

Houa Lor from Minnesota on January 18, 2011:

I love this!

b. Malin on January 18, 2011:

I love the line..."we can slay any Dragon...Beautiful poetry...Hope she didn't give up on you. Thanks for sharing.

sandy27m on January 18, 2011:

Hi Burns,This is a very inspiring poem,to always have a hope and never give up !Greatmessage Greatwork keep it up!

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 17, 2011:

Cracknutcase - Thank you for the compliment. I have read some of your poems and now I am your fan too!

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 17, 2011:

Tndrheart - I am glad that you liked it! Thank-you for saying so!

Kristen Burns-Darling (author) from Orange County, California on January 17, 2011:

richtwf - Thank you for your kind words. I agree that tenacity is a very important trait, especially in a relationship. So many people these days just thow up their hands and walk away at the first sign of conflict.

Cracknutcase from India,bangalore on January 17, 2011:

Excellent!! I will never give upon you...

Thanks for sharing this...

tnderhrt23 on January 17, 2011:

K Burns Darling, I just love this!!! Wow! Powerful heart message put so well, with rhyme and flow. Just awesome, this!

richtwf on January 17, 2011:

Wonderful poem with an excellent message of never giving up hope and to keep going.

I think many can relate to us. Some will unfortunately give up when they are so close to seeing the light while others find the fortitude to keep going no matter what. Sometimes one is carrying another forward and that's even harder. But love and unshakeable faith can do amazing things ... so never give up hope in what we truly believe.

Thanks for sharing these thoughts and God bless.

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