Poems & Poetry About Never, Not Ever Giving Up On Love -Please Believe, I Don't Want To Give Up On Us - We Can Make It
Don't give up on us
Before we've even begun
Just because you're afraid
Of things yet to come.
Take hold of my hand
See yourself as I do,
Believe when I say
I've enough faith for two.
Don't trade me for doubt
The doubt is not real,
Besides, it's no match
For the love that I feel.
There is nothing stronger
Than this bond that we share,
Not those who wish to destroy
Or the crosses we bear.
Can stand up against
The magic of us,
We can slay any dragon
And turn it to dust.
Close your eyes to the darkness,
Close your ears to the lies,
Don't let go of my heart,
Happiness is the prize.
Don't give up on us
Because I don't want to go,
You have my heart,
You're half of my soul.
If you tried to make me
I wouldn't be able to leave,
You're as necessary to me
As the air that I breathe.
So don't break my heart,
In this you can trust
I love you forever
Please don't give up on us.
© 2011 Kristen Burns-Darling
Comments
AUTHOR@Jade89 - Thank you for the gift of your time and for your gracious comments, they are both welcomed and deeply appreciated!
Kristen
OMG This is really beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing .
Really amzing
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@Ebower - Thank you so much for the generosity of your time and your comments they are both welcomed and deeply appreciated. It is true that once hurt makes most of us twice shy, I am glad that you enjoyed this. I have read a couple of your poems as well, they are absolutely beautiful, and I am looking forward to reading more!
Thanks Again,
Kristen
This was wonderful. Many of us are afraid of loving someone, because we've been hurt in the past. I voted this up and beautiful!
DEDICATED TO MY HONEY, I LOVE THIS POEM...
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@Elisa659 - Thank you for your kind words, I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing your poem.. My favorite lines-"you have my heart-you're half of my soul.. so beautiful..what an inspiring message.
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@Prairieprincess - Thank you for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed it. :-)
This is so beautiful, and so heartfelt! This poem makes a real statement about love and endurance.
The shorter lines, repetition and rhyme give it a lovely flow and rhythm. Very enjoyable to read!
You have got to love a poem about love and strength! Very original!
Thank you for letting us, the reader, take that inner journey there right where you are. Inspiring!
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Malin - Thank-you.....Acutally, he didn't. In March we will have been married for 19 years.
Houa Lor - Thank-you, much appreciated, I checked out some of your hubs too, and was impressed, so am now following you as well.
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I love this!
I love the line..."we can slay any Dragon...Beautiful poetry...Hope she didn't give up on you. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Burns,This is a very inspiring poem,to always have a hope and never give up !Greatmessage Greatwork keep it up!
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Cracknutcase - Thank you for the compliment. I have read some of your poems and now I am your fan too!
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Tndrheart - I am glad that you liked it! Thank-you for saying so!
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richtwf - Thank you for your kind words. I agree that tenacity is a very important trait, especially in a relationship. So many people these days just thow up their hands and walk away at the first sign of conflict.
Excellent!! I will never give upon you...
Thanks for sharing this...
K Burns Darling, I just love this!!! Wow! Powerful heart message put so well, with rhyme and flow. Just awesome, this!
Wonderful poem with an excellent message of never giving up hope and to keep going.
I think many can relate to us. Some will unfortunately give up when they are so close to seeing the light while others find the fortitude to keep going no matter what. Sometimes one is carrying another forward and that's even harder. But love and unshakeable faith can do amazing things ... so never give up hope in what we truly believe.
Thanks for sharing these thoughts and God bless.
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