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Do Not Give Up


I can draw my toughts in word .I can write poems in three different languages.


Do not give up

people will hurt you in front of your eyes

You will be helplessly standing aside

No one will hear your cries

Don't panic this is the law of life

To ourselves, we always lie

We didn't have wings so we can't fly

Achieve your goal no matter how much it is high

If you step forward you will not die

Stand if you fall

If you can't walk then crawl

The stones thrown at you reflect back

If you make yourself strong like a wall

To fight we are not that strong

This makes our decision wrong

If you stop you will realize everything has gone

Don't take the light wind anything

If it turns can changes into a storm



Jannat (author) from pakistan on August 22, 2020:

Yeh brenda its the only way to success.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on August 19, 2020:


This is so true.

I love this part...Stand if you fall

If you can't walk then crawl

We must keep going to succeed.

Nice write.

Jannat (author) from pakistan on August 17, 2020:

Thank you for giving a time to read my article and appreciating.

thoughtsprocess from Navsari (India) on August 16, 2020:

Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for sharing these positive words.

Jannat (author) from pakistan on August 09, 2020:

Thank you zuni for appreciating.

Zuni from Scotland on August 09, 2020:

So well written!

Jannat (author) from pakistan on August 08, 2020:

Thank you cheryl for reading and apreciating.

Jannat (author) from pakistan on August 08, 2020:

Spreading positivity is my big purpose.thank you munawar for reading.

Dr Sleep from Pak on August 08, 2020:

I like the positivity

Cheryl E Preston from Roanoke on August 07, 2020:

Beautiful poem and so inspiring.

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