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Deriving Positively

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Normally my poems are more down and depressing, but I've been working on self positivity and trying to gain more self confidence.

Up at night riding the white horse,


Lyrical metaphors straight from the source,


The floor is yours whenever the rainfall pours,


Reinforce the corpse as life runs its course,


Endorse the scheme of the supreme being,


Seeing a light beam out of this dream,


It seems the dire situation is losing communication,


Sittin and waitin with mental frustration,


Makin instead of breakin and taken mutilation,


No relation to stride inside out or upside down,


A frowned reaction for our passion,


Not lashin out but cash in doubt,


Crashin south views because I payed my dues,


I hate to lose but when I do I get the blues.

© 2018 Tommy Hall

Comments

Tommy Hall (author) from Simi Valley on November 02, 2018:

Thank you very much man, I'm very glad you enjoyed it

Mark Tulin from Ventura, California on November 01, 2018:

Some terrific lines. Enjoyed this.