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Death and Commas

My name is Jamie Lee Hamann and I started sharing poetry articles back in 2013. Every year I share a poem a day in April.

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Death and Commas

Chase led by hounds

hell and handbags

death and commas.

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Brave character

leaves on a bus to serve

small town, first love

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Her broken heart grieves

reads his obituary

twenty years later

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Lives in armchair

writes memoirs

death and commas

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Just die in the end

always seems heroic

really just anticlimactic

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Brings them back to life

certain stories sell

continual battle between

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Editor’s comments

Editor’s comments

death and commas.

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)



Reminder of the mark

that damn mark

precise rule of usage

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Balance maintained

atlas as grammar

lord of my thoughts

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Death and commas

we did choose this path

to understand how to die

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


How to write

how to use commas

how to combine

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)


Death and commas

Lies in story

Betrayal (Break) Irony (Break)

(Break)

(end)

© 2020 Jamie Lee Hamann

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