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Dead In Heaven

I have been writing poetry, fiction and short stories for many years and have completed a book of poems. I also enjoy comedy writing.

Heaven Dead

Heaven Dead

I laughed at Lucifer as he made a last swipe at my soul as I ascended in Heaven.

Gods light engulfed me bringing me up slowly

I pointed the middle finger at the devil and smiled as I left

Slowly the light took me as s baby crept

I reached up to the clouds and saw beauty unimaginable

People dressed in beautiful colors all seemed happy and cheerful

A broad smiled came upon my face as I approached the large black gate

Then a thunderous voice shouted me out and told me to step aside and wait

I watch as people passed me and all went inside

I began to get nervous and restless

Then an old man approached me and told me to follow him this way

We went into a sort of backdoor into heaven

But it did not seem glorious as entering the front

He told me that the book made a mistake and I am supposed to go down

Down to Lucifer to help balance his crown.

I cried and cried and my heart got swollen with reject

But before I could get into hell I would have to die again

Suddenly I was struck by a huge lightning bolt

I was dead in heaven to go to hell.


Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 02, 2020:

Heloo Flourish. Thanks.

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 02, 2020:

You on Point Nell

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 02, 2020:

Ruby, God loves Poems. After all, in the beginning was the word and the word was with God. The word is life and creation. Just like poetry.

Nell Rose from England on January 02, 2020:

lol! painful! What a great poem, and it proves that you should behave to make sure you go the right way up! LOL!

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 02, 2020:

Now you know-never give the middle finger to old Lucifer. Your imagination is on fire with Godly poetry, I know when you do die you'll go through the pearly gates. I hope to see you there. Do you think God will let us write poems there? I hope so.

FlourishAnyway from USA on January 02, 2020:

You definitely have a theme going

Clive Williams (author) from Jamaica on January 01, 2020:

exactly brenda

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 01, 2020:


So sad to have to die again just to go down to hell.

Of course, I figured you were being demoted because you gave the middle finger on your way up.

Nice one.

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