Dancing Sky - A Poem

A. Lin is a passionate young writer, wanting to share her creations with the world.

The stars dance as I gaze at the moon

The sun no longer here;

Asleep—awaiting to rise

The sunset fades and midnight is finally here

I feel chills as I stand alone on this hill

My hair swept up in the evening breeze

Shivers roll down my spine

I feel as if the sky is begging me to dance,

But I remain still

Comments

Delilah from Kentucky on June 21, 2018:

Nice poem :)

Rinita Sen on June 21, 2018:

Vivid imagery in such few words. Nicely done!