Updated date:

May 29, 2019

Colorful window

Every week a window was opened,
to change the curtain.

Every week another was closed,
satisfied.

Comments

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on September 29, 2019:

That's a wonderful appreciation Terese. Thanks for the comment. :-)

terese on September 29, 2019:

like your poems - short and simple but you express yourself well.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 21, 2019:

Thanks nitasha. :-)

Nitasha on June 20, 2019:

A profound verse....abundance of wisdom in a few words...very well written.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 12, 2019:

Thank you so much audrey for your appreciation. :-)

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on June 12, 2019:

Thanks Genna for your beautiful appreciation note :-)

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on June 10, 2019:

This is a powerful and beautiful message. A lovely metaphor for life.

Genna East from Massachusetts, USA on June 02, 2019:

Sometimes, even a few of lines of a poem can convey a message that is enlightening and meaningful. Your poem is a wonderful example.

Hari Prasad S (author) from Bangalore on May 29, 2019:

Wonderful appreciation Ruby. :-) thanks.

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on May 29, 2019:

Being satisfied is blissful. A window of opportunity awaits.....