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Cold Lingering Love

I feel this love can be too cold

I am starting to want a new story told

The cool routine of apathy is getting old

So I will try to speak to be brave and bold.


It may be easier to give in and just fold

But I thought I treated you like gold

Gave you a warm hand to hold

Has your heart been bought and sold?


Do I really need even more of

Such a cool type of love?

It's time to grow and rise above

I believe in the power of higher love.

Cold Cold Heart

© 2021 Nella DiCarlo

Comments

Nella DiCarlo (author) from Guelph, Ontario on September 09, 2021:

Thank you for feedback! Many perspectives to think about and to help bring even more clarity to a situation.

Diana Carol Abrahamson from Somerset West on September 09, 2021:

Good poem Nella. Love needs to rise to that higher plateau, not a mediocre shadow of its true self.

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on September 09, 2021:

Sometimes it is smart to simply walk away. I really like this poem. Nella.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on September 08, 2021:

Sometimes we give more than we receive....

Is that honesty Love...

Or should we heed the warning staring us in the face.

Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on September 08, 2021:

Nella. Beautiful expressions. You have put your heart there. Appreciate the composition.

Misbah Sheikh from The World of Poets on September 08, 2021:

Beautiful poem, Nella. Well expressed and beautifully scribbled. Thank you for sharing.

Blessings to you!!

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