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Challenge by Brenda Arledge

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My first challenge. I am not a poet but I am attempting to learn how to finish this challenge.

Tomorrow, I Wonder what Comes Next

Today I wonder What Comes Next:

Today I wonder what comes next

Only time will tell

Maybe it will be good things

Or maybe it will be challenging

Running won't help

Racing won't help

One only needs patience

Waiting to see tomorrow's outcome


Comments

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on March 30, 2021:

I like the idea of employing patience on a day-to-day basis. Tomorrow will come soon enough.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on March 30, 2021:

Fran,

That sounds great! I look forward to reading it.

fran rooks (author) from Toledo, Ohio on March 30, 2021:

Rosina, thank you for your visit and encouragement! I enjoyed my first attempt and will try again.

fran rooks (author) from Toledo, Ohio on March 30, 2021:

Brenda, thank you for your kind comments. I think I'll try another! That was fun.

Rosina S Khan on March 30, 2021:

A nice attempt at your first poem. I would request you to keep on writing poems until you become an expert and others read your poems with awe and wonder. You can do that, Fran. Keep on going.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on March 30, 2021:

Fran,

Thank you for sharing your first poem with us.

I'm amazed that you chose to write an acrostic poem as your first piece of poetry.

This a a very good acrostic poem.

I love the message.

No one knows what tomorrow will bring.

There's no sense rushing through life, tomorrow will be here soon enough.

Great job! I think you are ready to write another one.

Have a great day!

I will post a link on my article so others can read.

fran rooks (author) from Toledo, Ohio on March 30, 2021:

Thank you Pamela. It is certainly short and I'm learning.

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on March 30, 2021:

This is a wonderful response to Brenda's prompt, Fran. I really like it and the messsage it delievers.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on March 30, 2021:

Fran, Well done with this acrostic poem in response to Brenda’s prompt.

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