Donna is a wonderful poetess and writes about her love for the Lord in poems and acrostics. "Let Me Paint You A Picture - A Picture Words"

That Old Rugged Cross

Christ Jesus carried His old rugged cross

Along the streets of Via Dolorosa

Losing His balance for his strength was gone but he knew:

Victory stood in the distance, the veil would soon be torn

As Simon, the Cyrenian helps Jesus carry that old rugged cross on the;

Road to Golgotha - known as the place of the skull was not too far off

Yeshua cried unto the Father

God why hast thou forsaken me

Omniscient, Omnipotent, perfect Father of mine

Love me, Father, for I am afraid, it's been 3 days now

Give me thy strength O Lord God, for they laugh me to scorn

Out of my loins, my blood pours out all the way down this old cross

The soldiers, they mock at me, come down and save yourself!

Holy One of Israel - My Father - My King

Accept me now for it is finished for time and all eternity

"Let me paint you a picture - a picture with words"

Thank you, Lord, for the gift of writing poetry!

I praise the Lord for the gift of writing from my heart in hope of touching your hearts and bring the joy of beautiful memories past and future.

And most of all in sharing my love of Christ Jesus with the world- Amen

— Donna Rayne

© 2020 Donna Rayne

Comments

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on March 10, 2020:

You did a beautiful job of portraying the message of Christ and His sacrifice for us with your poetry.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 19, 2020:

Thank you so much, William, I appreciate that!

Blessings,

Donna Rayne

William Kovacic from Pleasant Gap, PA on January 19, 2020:

Donna, these are very beautiful. Your gift of words certainly shows through in the truth of these pieces.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 15, 2020:

Manatita44, thank you so much. Have a blessed day!

Donna Rayne

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 15, 2020:

Thank you so much, Brenda. I appreciate that a lot!

Have a lovely day!

Donna Rayne

manatita44 from london on January 15, 2020:

We can never stop praising ... it can never be too much. Carry on! Carry on!

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 14, 2020:

I love how you write your poetry.

Spirituality has embraced you to tell his story.

Great read.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 14, 2020:

Me too, Ms. Ruby! And thank you for your kind words, as always.

Blessings always,

Donna Rayne

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on January 14, 2020:

I love that old classic song, and I loved your beautiful poetry.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 14, 2020:

Thank you, I appreciate you reading my acrostic poem. I'm glad it touched you so!

Blessings,

Donna Rayne

Juvijani on January 14, 2020:

Thanks for letting the world know hw precious they are to God , for jesus to sacrifice everthing for us he did it be cos he loves us so much. May God increase ur wisdom to write more books in jesus name AMEN.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 14, 2020:

Thank you very much, Rosina, I appreciate that and thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot!

Blessings always,

Donna Rayne

Rosina S Khan on January 14, 2020:

It is interesting to see how you are becoming more spiritual as each day passes by. I have also incurred losses and now I pray and recite the Holy Book regularly. May our lives shine following spirituality and achieving the things we really desire, my friend.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 13, 2020:

Thank you, Lorna, I appreciate your kind words. Have a lovely day!

Blessings,

Donna Rayne

Lorna Lamon on January 13, 2020:

The strength of your faith shines through in every line Donna. Beautifully told.

Donna Rayne (author) from Sparks, Nevada on January 13, 2020:

Aww.... thank you, Ms. Pamela. I appreciate your sweet words.

God bless you always,

Donna Rayne

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 13, 2020:

Jesus sure suffered for us. You summed up the facts about the cross very well. You always give us some hope for the future with your strong belief in our Lord, Donna.