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Breezy and So Perfect


What An Amazing Day

The cool air circulating like an invisible silent motorized fan

Our own being tossed in a snow globe

Where everything is moved around

Each untimely woosh

Lovely patting across my face

The smell of rain in the air

Refreshing little droplets

Wonderful talented dancers performing on top of my skin

The tallest trees bowing to their majesty

The sky darker their usual

Calming the world of all it's brightness

Soothing in so many ways

Whimsical at best

An early morning cricket serenade

What's not to love

The bells and chimes of my hanging marching band

Sounding off in sweet harmony

My two curtains pushed back constantly

Revealing the opening act of the worlds greatest stage

The birds chirping so quietly almost silent

Then a little louder and more often

Reminding us of all the complexities of life

As a chill surges through my body

Quicker than lightning can strike

Both my finger tips and feet tingling simultaneously

Filling my whole body with joy

From awake to sleep

Each time more empowered and conditioned

To welcome the impossible

An owl now sounding off like a trumpets blare

The morning light guiding us in a new direction

For what's to come is only a sample of all that is magnificent

As a crow carefully selects everyone who is not listening

To wake up and welcome this incredible day


DREAM ON (author) on June 20, 2018:

Gypsy Rose Lee The ten day count down. I am so thrilled and happy to see things looking up. Florida is a place so many people dream of living there and you are going to tell us first hand. Another day of nice weather and I am busy doing chores in the house. At least I have the windows open to see the sunshine. You can't have everything you want. Busy at work and writing had to wait. Now I am playing catch up. Thank you for reading and commenting.

DREAM ON (author) on June 19, 2018:

John Hansen I don't know why anyone would want to live any other way. So much to see and do. All we have to do is enjoy . Thank you for reading my poem. What a great feeling when someone appreciates your effort and energy. Have a beautiful day.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on June 18, 2018:

The days have been unusually calm, warm and sunny here. That is great but we need rain so desperately. Anyway, Sid and I are flying out on June 29 to Amsterdam and then by Delta to Orlando, Florida.

John Hansen from Gondwana Land on June 17, 2018:

Dream On, this was so descriptive and a lovely depiction of the start of an incredible day. We should always wake up looking forward to the day ahead and the wonders it may bring.

DREAM ON (author) on June 14, 2018:

Louise Powless It is fun sharing early morning views. The weather is always changing. Just a little bit different everywhere. I am glad you like my recreation of my day in my poems. There are some tough times but after working through them they slowly become easier. Then other days our non stop happiness from beginning to end. Thank you so much for reading. I hope your day is going well. Have a peaceful and blessed afternoon.

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on June 14, 2018:

I always enjoy reading your poems. Every day is an amazing day. =)

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