Behind Time - A Poem

Updated on June 11, 2018
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Rinita is a creative writer, with focus on poetry, short stories, food, and music.

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The Poem

“You!”, in the middle of the night

Someone white called unto me

My eyes on the flame, burning bright

Led me on to the fantasy


A distant island, a feared dream

Rocks, and edges sharp as knives

Into the river, fell time with a gleam

Splash and swirl, brought on the vibes


Once on the raft, through I sailed

A fruit-bearing orchard closed in

Echoes and shadows partly veiled

Made my soul turn, and heart spin


Dusk it was, and getting sublime

The bird of prey in its beak

Took my hands bound with time

Flew with rage, over the creek


Hands folded, I stared at my white

Companion beyond the blue flame

A hint of red melting on either side

Cocooned I was in the time warp game


The Explanation

The protagonist here battles with a consistent companion, which is the ghost of her past. She wants to do away with it, but her heart is not in it, as she longs to go back to the past that was brighter than her dreary present, and she is constantly transporting her mind back and forth, every time coming back with misery and pain, but wanting to go back again. Thus, in the time warp she remains, comfortable though sorry.

Written as a tribute to the Master, Mr. Dickens, for giving us the wonderful gift of "A Christmas Carol" more than a hundred and fifty years ago.

© 2018 Rinita Sen

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      Rinita Sen 6 days ago

      Thank you, Hari, and I am glad you agree about troubling thoughts. Thank you again for reading.

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      Hari Prasad S 6 days ago from Bangalore

      Great poetry Rinita. The context of the poem is well explained and that makes the poem much more dramatic and heart felt. Troubling thoughts are infact quite erratic and writing about it isn't easy too.

      - hari

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      Rinita Sen 12 days ago

      Thank you, manatita for echoing my thoughts, although, there is always a calm inner soul in the wildest of brutes. Just need to find that moment of peace in times of turmoil. Thank you again for visiting.

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      manatita44 12 days ago from london

      Life. It is just like that Rinita. Full of the past and future ... scare of the Here and Now. Quite scary, really.

      "Face the brute!" Vivikanada used to say. Face the brute.

      Great poetry!

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      Rinita Sen 13 days ago

      Thank you Linda for your visit. Glad you enjoyed the write.

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      Linda Crampton 13 days ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Your poem and explanation are very interesting. I enjoy exploring the nature of time in real life and in poetry and fiction.

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      Rinita Sen 13 days ago

      Thanks again :)

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      Frank Atanacio 2 weeks ago from Shelton

      you need no nudge.. just write what you write so well...:)

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      Rinita Sen 2 weeks ago

      Thank you, Frank. Well, you did give the nudge!

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      Frank Atanacio 2 weeks ago from Shelton

      This was a fantastic piece, and it's so nice to see something new from you

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      Rinita Sen 2 weeks ago

      Thank you Peggy, truly appreciate your visit.

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      Peggy Woods 2 weeks ago from Houston, Texas

      This is an interesting poem which I read twice after reading your explanation of it. As to "A Christmas Carol"...that is certainly a classic!

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