Behind That Smile.
Behind this smile
I hear you singing;
Hoping against hope
It's me you're loving.
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A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
At a painful cost
Myself I'm fooling
In your shadow lost.
x
A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
In the sun's beam
I try my hardest
To be seen.
x
A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
Imagining such loving;
But slowly questioning
Are these thoughts fitting ?
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A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
I still feel pain;
One heart's hope
Crying in the rain.
x
A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
I'll carry on hoping
That it's me one day
You will be loving.
x
A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
x
Behind this smile
My dream now true;
The words you sang
'I do love you.'
x
A love I crave
From afar
A love so rare
A shining star.
Comments
Very nice.
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Thank you so much Dora. Yoyr comment greatly appreciated.
"Behind this smile . . . I try my hardest / To be seen." There's so much drama here. Mind. body and soul are all involved. Good work!
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Thank you Linda and how lovely it is to be back too. Here's to so many more moments for us both to share on here.
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Thank you also Nell, Peggy, Liz and Eric for taking the time to read and leave your great comments as always.
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Shaune ,John and Ruby how lovely to be back in your midst and look forward to so many more moments and thoughts to share with you all on here.
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Thank you also Jamie, Pamrla and FlourishAnyway for taking the time to stop by and comment.
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Thank you Manatita. Your words so greatly appreciated.
The rhythm in this poem is lovely. As others have said, it's great to have you back, Eddy!
Just beautiful. I savored it.
I like the use of the chorus in this lovely poem.
This would make great lyrics for a song. So happy to be reading your posts again!
Beautiful! I did miss your poems Eddy, good to see you back.
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Beautiful poetry Eddy. I'm happy to be reading your thoughts again.
Great poetry Eddy. Welcome back.
And she's back!!! I've missed your poetry, Eddy.
A love made true. Just when we had it pegged as unrequited, there’s the surprising ending.
I love the flow of this beautiful poem. The ending is excellent and I really enjoyed reading this poem.
I love the flow of this beautiful poem. The ending is excellent and I really enjoyed reading this poem.
I enjoyed reading. Lovely poetry. Jamie
Wow! What an ending! A extremely beautiful piece! Well woven and would make a n excellent song!
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It is indeed akin to coming home Bill and your words mean a lot my dear friend.
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Thank you so much Devika for taking the time to stop by and comment.
I rejoice in your return to HP, my friend. You have been missed by old-timers like me. :)
Hi Eiddwen so nise to read another hub from you. It is often hidden when one feels awkward. That smile is great but never shows what you are hiding from every one else.Love makes one feel happy and to smile and this is rare.
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Thank you so much Lorna and so glad you enjoyed it.
How beautiful your words sound in this gentle poem Eiddwen - like the lyrics of a song. Loved it.
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