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Beginning of Spring-Haiku

Nithya Venkat enjoys writing about nature and different aspects of life in the form of poetic verses.

waiting for the sun

waiting for the sun

wind in the willows

heavy branches feel relieved

beginning of spring


drop by drop snow melts

leaves drip in golden hues

rainbow reflections


listen to the birds

chirp in anticipation

sip of sweet nectar


© 2019 Nithya Venkat

Comments

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on May 11, 2020:

Thank you Brenda, the weather has gone crazy I guess. I hope you get your spring soon.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on May 10, 2020:

This is great Haiku.

Just had to read because the calendar says its spring but it's really strange here.

We were in the twenties over night yesterday but today we had thunderstorms. Tomorrow it might snow.

But come the weekend it will be 70's and thunderstorms.

Oh where...is my spring?

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on November 24, 2019:

Thank you Devika, spring is a beautiful season,

Devika Primic on November 24, 2019:

Spring is a lovely time of the year. A deep sense of outdoors in the spring and you expressed your words in depth.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on October 30, 2019:

Thank you Genna, for your appreciation.

Genna East from Massachusetts, USA on October 26, 2019:

Your Haiku's are always a pleasure to read, Nithya. We could actually feel "waiting for the sun..." Beautifully done.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on October 16, 2019:

Thank you Peggy, Fall must be so beautiful with vibrant colors.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on October 16, 2019:

Your lines "heavy branches feel relieved" takes me back in time to Wisconsin when the blue spruce trees and others like them would suddenly drop their heavy loads of snow. Such evocative poetry! You do it well. We are in fall mode on our side of the world right now.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on October 01, 2019:

Thank you Abitha.

Abitha from Chennai, Tamilnadu on September 30, 2019:

Illustrative poetry, very enjoyable Nithya.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Ruby. Spring is a beautiful season.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Flourish Anyway.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Lora. Fall and spring are my favorite too.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Linda.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Eric.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Thank you Neela.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 26, 2019:

Chitrangada thank you, much appreciated.

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on September 26, 2019:

Beautifully expressed Haiku. This is called painting the picture with your words.

Well composed. Thanks for sharing.

Neela S from India on September 26, 2019:

So simple and sweet words...

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on September 25, 2019:

Fantastic. You did real good here. Thank you.

Linda Crampton from British Columbia, Canada on September 25, 2019:

You've created some lovely images of spring with your words. Thank you for sharing them.

Lora Hollings on September 25, 2019:

Beautiful haiku about the beginning of Spring! You paint a lovely description of this season. I really enjoyed it. Both Fall and Spring are my favorite seasons. Thanks for sharing.

FlourishAnyway from USA on September 25, 2019:

This really paints the picture with words. It’s fall in our world but I think forward ...

Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on September 25, 2019:

Beautiful, I love the spring season. Soon winter will arrive here.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 25, 2019:

Thank you, Bill. It is always summer in Dubai.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 25, 2019:

Thank you Liz Westwood.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 25, 2019:

Thank you Shaloo Walia.

Nithya Venkat (author) from Dubai on September 25, 2019:

Thank you John.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on September 25, 2019:

I'm jealous that your spring is beginning. Our fall is starting hour chilly, a harbinger for a long winter to come. Lovely poetry, my friend.

Liz Westwood from UK on September 25, 2019:

Great description of the change in the seasons.

Shaloo Walia from India on September 25, 2019:

Beautiful imagery!

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on September 25, 2019:

Lovely haiku, Nithya. You painted a beautiful picture of the coming of spring.

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