Ascertain
Ascertain
Pulled to ground zero, by norms,
I’m aiming high to nullify them.
Going south, i’ve found, way down the gut,
An unknown source of strength.
The voice is uprising,
Steadily on the horizon.
Fear I have none,
I ascertain.
© 2017 Hari Prasad S
Comments
Hi Hari. I like the flying spirit in your poem. There are contradictory meanings like ground, high, south and strength. Nice to know there is positivity everywhere. Keep up the fearlessness hehe...Thanks for sharing.
Your poem is a beautiful expression of power and strength. Loved the picture too.
Thanks for sharing!
What a brilliant, brave declaration!
Interesting encapsulation of a situational thought process with appropriately selected words. I like it.
Once the man hits the nadir,nothing is there to
loose.Spirit is high.ambition
is high so looks to soar!
Lovely and very powerful poem! Inspirational!
Hari, your poem is inspiring and uplifting.
Blessings my friend.
Yes, you are right that this poem is similar to the one I just wrote and posted. Yours, too, is inspiring. I particularly like the opening lines of yours.
Ha ha. Sometimes I think you live here, Bro. Aren't you five hours ahead of me? Carry on ...
An awesome piece! So creative! Just genius!
Really nicely penned.
Very well written.
You really can say a great deal in just a few words friend. I like this one.
That's beautiful, you convey power and strength very well, and the message is a good one.
Good for you Hari. Fear can be so very debilitating. You have proven one can rise above it..
An exquisite piece! Truly meaningful!!
Your poem made me stop and think about the world today and my place within it. Well written and a joy to read. Jamie
It's powerful! Such an interesting choice of words. I like it, Hari.
A confidence personified by the poet
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