Distance and Space Between Us

Updated on May 14, 2018
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Poetry brings Solace,,, wrote a poem to remind myself that Im not alone, and there's more to life than I imagine

Why write?

Have you ever had that instance where you find someone you didn't know but seems too familiar ? Kinda makes you think like you have already known that person, not here, maybe from the other time,.. But the saddest part is that you don't talk and you're barely a stranger to him/her.


Hey, how are you?

That is what I wanted to ask

Have you been well?

or maybe cold during the dusk

Can I help you on your daily task?

or Ima just a dust to you...

Oh what the hell Ima thinking

she's been there for you

unconsciously kind to you and helping

Being the reason for your world to rotate

As my universe sunks,

to you I orbit

Its funny how I think

That you were just pretending

when you wink

I thought you actually had feelings

But naaa ,

You were just playing cool

And now look,

Ima such a fool

So fooollll that I can't bair to pretend

That my heart isn't aching as I see

broken pieces descends

Unto the ground it lands

The broken pieces of my fantasies

Oh dear guy,

why is destiny so cruel?

I mean , Have I not been good in this existence?

You've been a fuel

To reach my goals no matter the distance

I know it's weird

To wish you both a happy life

I feared

When the day comes

You'd see her as your wife

But what can I do

With her you're happy

Boy, I love you

But I don't wanna be trashy

Questions & Answers

    © 2018 Jai Hitachiin


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      • JaiAsahi23 profile imageAUTHOR

        Jai Hitachiin 

        10 months ago

        Thank you Ms.. Missy .. I might be too obvious and open to my works..

        like a diary, but only in selected words. Hehe I dont know if I should keep doing this?

      • JaiAsahi23 profile imageAUTHOR

        Jai Hitachiin 

        10 months ago

        Sir dad Sean , thankyou for the appreciation ,I never knew I had gifts until you made me realize of what I have and what I am.. The only thing is I find it hard to show it ,, sometimes Im not sure if I should be doing all this things or just to keep all it in my notes .. I hope I can open my eyes to what's more .. and find love in myslef .. thank you very much :)

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        Missy Smith 

        10 months ago from Florida

        I am loving that you have been moved to letterpile on all of your poems. They belong there. Great job on this one as well. It makes the reader contemplate a life - your life, I presume? Your artwork is fab as well!! :)

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        Ioannis Arvanitis 

        10 months ago from Greece, Almyros

        Oh! Jai! My dear Jai, you are not a young poet! No, you are an old Soul who came back to this world to write again about things that we all had experienced sometime!

        Great Job! And I am happy that HubPages' editors can see it and move your poems among the highest.

        I only want to say that we have to learn to love ourselves, not in a selfish way, for the gift we are to this world. Then it would be easier for others to see our beauty, inner and outer! So please, see it, you have A LOT!

        Much Love and Admiration!


      • JaiAsahi23 profile imageAUTHOR

        Jai Hitachiin 

        10 months ago

        Dear Mr. Kenneth I was loving this guy unconditionally ,, and it doesn't require him to love me back, If he's happy with whom he is with now. I have nothing to do but just to accept the fact that I'm way out of his league :(

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        Kenneth Avery 

        10 months ago from Hamilton, Alabama

        Wow! Such honesty in your writing as well as your inside topics.

        Loved how you stood your ground, but yet, you gave some of your ground away to just (as I seen it) be with "him" and now after that

        forlorn retreat, I have to ask , why?

        Isn't peace found sometimes without anyone but you?

        I hope that this comment is not in the lines of my abstract/prose works, I was just enamored by your work.

        Keep in touch with me . . .


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