...Appraising the Avalanche...

Updated on January 8, 2018

A frozen epiphany, underground

Endorphin elation, barbaric sound

Deep within, vision blurs

Fetal pulse points, amateur

Breathing, with flowing sweat

Primal victory is met

The avalanche slopes ahead

Slowing, a sense of dread

Until the realization arose

To set it back

Truth now plain, exposed

Arms outstretched, palms upright

Pushing back, second sight

Goddess warrior white, gold

Differentiates with truth untold

Appraising the avalanche inside

Absolute answer within, resides


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    Carole Anzolletti 2 weeks ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    Tim, thank you also!

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    Tim Truzy 2 weeks ago from U.S.A.

    Wonderful article. Great poem. Thank you.

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    Carole Anzolletti 2 weeks ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    Clive, this makes you think in spades, yes?

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    Carole Anzolletti 2 weeks ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    Isabella, that makes me incredibly grateful and inspired. What an amazing thing to read this morning. Thank you for your gracious and motivating words xo

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    Bella Allred 2 weeks ago

    Well holy crap that was beautiful and intense and so so good to read. I especially loved all the precise word choice and I can't wait to see more hubs from you

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    Clive Williams 2 weeks ago from Jamaica

    puzzling

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    Carole Anzolletti 2 weeks ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    Threekeys, what a great name! Thank you so much for writing and I am so grateful for your comment

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    Threekeys 2 weeks ago from Australia

    Intense and all told.

    Look foward to more of your poetry. All the best to you.