Aesthetic! Aesthetic! Aesthetic!
T. M.
Words have meaning
Thoughts flow freely
Letters lead to a picture not yet drawn
I just experienced an early morning yawn
I am not bored or tired
So why would such a thing happen to me
I write out of inspiration from others
If this is you then you have guessed right
Not so fast my friend
You will have to be put to the test
Do you write from the heart?
Do you have an idea and are not sure where or what you should do with it ?
So your write to shed some light
To see what develops
Making friends in many far away places
In an effort to write more of what moves you
Does this sound like you ?
Please continue
Have you had some tough times in the past
Wishing and wanting to give them a last push
Over a cliff would be nice
Do you find breathing amazing ?
Well I have news for you
So do I
How incredible is it
That every person in the world is breathing all at the same time
But nobody hears them
What if we all made a sound of a musical instrument when we breathe
Wouldn't that be something special
We would have natural music every day
Depending on who we meet
We could be playing two different instruments at the same time
Maybe the same instrument at different times
Wouldn't that be truly amazing
When you have two or more people to a room
You have your own band
Every day you create different music
The sound is never the same
If you can follow my train of thought
Then you also could be that person I am talking about
There are more questions to follow
At any time if you get a question wrong
This hub was only part about you
It was directed to another friend
If you are busy
So busy you don't have any time to call or write
This could still be you
You are always trying different writing sites because you think they are better
Maybe they are
Maybe they aren't
Only you can find the answer
You left for awhile and now came back
You write wonderful hubs that explore our imagination
You rather help someone than hurt
You would never use four you's in a row
Unlike me
Because that wouldn't be lady like
But you can and do create
Inspiring stories and poems
A long time ago you were suppose to collaborate on a poem
That poem drifted away in time
It never found the right home
There are so many ideas that come and go
It can be hard to pin point just one
So lets pretend to play an old game
Called pin the tail on the donkey
Instead of a donkey
Lets change it up a bit
Pin the tail on the horse
I love horses
They are so beautiful
I wouldn't want to own one
I have never rode one
They truly are magnificent animals
They come in different colors too
So I am asking you to find this wild horse
A stallion
There is no right or wrong way
So give it a try
Tell me what you have tried
I will add this to my stoem story/poem
Then we have done something we set out to do
A long, long time ago
It was my fault as well as yours
Work, sleep and don't forget we have to eat
If you followed me this far
You are close to finding out the answer
The title held another significant clue
Do you know what that could be ?
Then the subtitle also held another clue
Anyone have an idea on what those those simple letters could mean ?
T can stand for today or tomorrow
A hint to do something now or really soon
M can stand for motion
Things in motion stay in motion unless another force is acted upon it
Now if we put both clues together
What do we get ?
A riddle inside a poem inside a story
That seems a little deep
One creation inside of another creation
It seems like a whole of rambling about nothing to me
Then each might be just another clue
A modern day word puzzle using actual words
Words arranged in our mind
Not on paper
Who does that ?
Who has the key to solve that ?
Someone who has a lot of time on their hands
The funny thing is they never wear a watch
So that means they carry a phone
Maybe an old phone and they were going to buy a new one
Then again that was months ago
I live in a place where we have known to get some snow
Even as early as tonight
I could sure use some warm weather
Do you live where it doesn't snow?
Another clue
Could this be you ?
Enough for now
In a place far, far away from here
To go where nobody has ever gone
Many things exist
If only in our minds
Expand our minds and what do we get
An idea and a friend
Questions & Answers
Comments
Sometimes I wish my brain would listen to nothing while I sleep. However even at rest I know it is just full of words and ideas. The worst thing is when I get up real early if I don't quickly turn around to attempt to fall back aslleep the brain takes over. Suddenly I close my eyes and I can visualize what the brain is telling me. If it get real excited that is it I am up and awake and back at the PC at an awful early hour.
"What do we get / An idea and a friend." That's worth it to meet people like you. It's the reason some of us keep going on HubPages.
I would have gotten the clues, and realized your poem was about me, but I did not want to say, “Oh, this must be about me”, and come off as presumptuous.
I felt that to be so forthcoming, on my part, would not have been polite. But, I did pick up on the things you said, the clues, and the letters of my name :-)
This is a fun read, and takes me in many creative directions. It stirs my imagination, and gives me an exhilarating start to my day. Thank you!
You're a very talented poet. I love reading your poetry. Thankyou. =)
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