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A Heartbreak on the First Day of Valentine's

Poetry brings Solace,,, wrote a poem to remind myself that Im not alone, and there's more to life than I imagine


"Feb 2"

Friday morning

It was raining

I was asked by my colleague to go upstairs

At first I didn't care

Because I didn't know you were there

At the hallway ,blankly I stare.

With an umbrella you suddenly


Day was freezing,

Surely it wasn't hot

But I am melting

I'm into you

If only you knew

I thought you knew

But later on I've noticed

it was too late to confess

Confess what I'm feeling

For you have been already dating

Dating the girl somehow

I can't afford to over power

I thought you've noticed

I thought......

© 2018 Jai Hitachiin


Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:

Im glad that it moved you Ms. Louise

Jai Hitachiin (author) on May 14, 2018:

Thank you for the kind support Ms. Missy .. I feel blessed :)

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on May 14, 2018:

That's a lovely and very moving poem.

Missy Smith from Florida on May 12, 2018:

I like how your poem takes the reader on a little journey into your heart. Be it sad, it is still human, which makes it inspirational to know. I hope that makes sense? Keep going! :)

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