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A Secret

a young aspiring poet who writes to express what her tears failed to explain



Unwritten lines

We lie between

She who writes

Know her from within

Tattered memories stains

upon your care discards

A hidden code she sings

Thy time spent with her resounds

You may not know her

Neither at present or past

Genuinely rare

Like a vast ocean of art

© 2018 Jai Hitachiin


Ray on December 28, 2018:

Wonderful piece

Tim Truzy from U.S.A. on October 18, 2018:

Excellent. You express your sorrow in your writings with resounding clarity. The secret is one even the narrator wishes to explore. The hidden truth within the narrator.

Great work.

Much respect,


Leslie Robertson from Tennessee on October 16, 2018:

I see/hear a lot of pain in your poetry chica, let the unrested words flow to paper while healing begins!

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