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A Piece Of Apple

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So Good


I started with the wonderful crunch

I let the juices flow down the front of my lips

Quickly catching them with my tongue

Not to miss any

Who could stop at just one piece

Not me

As I ate down to the core

I sat disappointed

I still wanted more

With only a few seeds left

I knew I had just finished something so delightful

Filling my stomach with vitamins and minerals

A good source of vitamin c

A loss for words

That is where I shall leave thee


Comments

DREAM ON (author) on April 04, 2018:

Peggy Woods I love all apples. What a great snack in the afternoon or even late night. What are your favorite apples? I cut them up in slices sometimes and cover them with a little whip cream. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Apples and more apples. That's what I like.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on April 03, 2018:

A good crisp apple is very satisfying as your poetry portrayed. I have some chilling in our refrigerator right now. Yummy!

DREAM ON (author) on March 13, 2018:

Nikki Khan I love that one bag of apples can go really far. They are not too expensive and keep for a few weeks. Thank you so much for finding me , reading and sharing some apple fun . I hope everything is well with you. Have a great night.

Nikki Khan from London on March 13, 2018:

I love apples and this poem is so inspiring, in fact my mouth was watering,, would eat one now :)

Wonderful poetry dear, thanks for sharing.

DREAM ON (author) on March 12, 2018:

Audrey Hunt I love apples because they keep longer than any other fruit. You don't have to worry about them being squished like a pear or messy like an orange. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Gypsy Rose Lee Both apples and watermelons are right up my alley. I love a big bowl of fruit salad. Audrey Hunt I believed an apple a day would keep the doctor away. It worked all these years I can't stop now. Thank you both so much for caring. Apples away and may you both have a wonderful day.

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on March 11, 2018:

Apples are my favorite. Love your interpretation. Thanks.

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on March 11, 2018:

Most creative. I read and I could visualize and get a scent of apple but what I really started craving for was watermelon.

Audrey Hunt from Idyllwild Ca. on March 10, 2018:

I'm an apple lover! Your description is perfect. Thank you.

DREAM ON (author) on March 10, 2018:

Michael=Milec A healthy body creates a healthy mind. There are so many different kinds of apples that give us a wonderful variety to eat. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Louise Powles There is nothing like a nice fresh homemade apple pie. Especially when you top it off with a scoop of ice cream. Thank you so much for reading and coming along with me on my apple journey. I wish you both a lovely morning.

Michael-Milec on March 09, 2018:

A Pleasurable prologue to good appetite for having an apple.

Thanks .

Louise Powles from Norfolk, England on March 09, 2018:

That's a lovely poem. I love apples. I especially love apple pie!

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