A Piece Of Apple

Updated on March 11, 2018

So Good

I started with the wonderful crunch

I let the juices flow down the front of my lips

Quickly catching them with my tongue

Not to miss any

Who could stop at just one piece

Not me

As I ate down to the core

I sat disappointed

I still wanted more

With only a few seeds left

I knew I had just finished something so delightful

Filling my stomach with vitamins and minerals

A good source of vitamin c

A loss for words

That is where I shall leave thee


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      DREAM ON 9 days ago

      Nikki Khan I love that one bag of apples can go really far. They are not too expensive and keep for a few weeks. Thank you so much for finding me , reading and sharing some apple fun . I hope everything is well with you. Have a great night.

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      Nikki Khan 9 days ago from London

      I love apples and this poem is so inspiring, in fact my mouth was watering,, would eat one now :)

      Wonderful poetry dear, thanks for sharing.

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      DREAM ON 11 days ago

      Audrey Hunt I love apples because they keep longer than any other fruit. You don't have to worry about them being squished like a pear or messy like an orange. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Gypsy Rose Lee Both apples and watermelons are right up my alley. I love a big bowl of fruit salad. Audrey Hunt I believed an apple a day would keep the doctor away. It worked all these years I can't stop now. Thank you both so much for caring. Apples away and may you both have a wonderful day.

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      Audrey Hunt 11 days ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      Apples are my favorite. Love your interpretation. Thanks.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 11 days ago from Riga, Latvia

      Most creative. I read and I could visualize and get a scent of apple but what I really started craving for was watermelon.

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      Audrey Hunt 12 days ago from Idyllwild Ca.

      I'm an apple lover! Your description is perfect. Thank you.

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      DREAM ON 12 days ago

      Michael=Milec A healthy body creates a healthy mind. There are so many different kinds of apples that give us a wonderful variety to eat. Thank you so much for reading and sharing. Louise Powles There is nothing like a nice fresh homemade apple pie. Especially when you top it off with a scoop of ice cream. Thank you so much for reading and coming along with me on my apple journey. I wish you both a lovely morning.

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      Michael-Milec 13 days ago

      A Pleasurable prologue to good appetite for having an apple.

      Thanks .

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      Louise Powles 13 days ago from Norfolk, England

      That's a lovely poem. I love apples. I especially love apple pie!