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A New Born Life


A new born life

So exciting

So new

Coming to term

Waiting to be born

This new shift

Will come soon

Only hoping

For beauty to bloom

In the anticipating

Awakening resides

A new dawn

A new life

Growing inside

What will come next

What happiness will lie

Only thoughts spin

In my mind

Of love until I die


Caroline Marie (author) on October 04, 2020:

Hi Brenda thank you for the read and comment. :)

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on August 01, 2019:

Looking forward to the birth of a child is always full of thoughts spinning in one's mind.

What a joy ... a newborn life.

Good read.

Caroline Marie (author) on January 09, 2019:

Thank you Gypsy :)

Gypsy Rose Lee from Daytona Beach, Florida on January 09, 2019:

Absolutely beautiful. Loved this.

Caroline Marie (author) on January 08, 2019:

Thank you Eric for reading and commenting. It's funny that you mention the birth of a baby because this poem was a comparison to childbirth in having a new born life. :)

Thank you Rinita for your kind words and for reading my poem. :)

Thank you John for your blessings, kind words and for reading my poem. :)

Eric Dierker from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A. on January 08, 2019:

I have always had a problem with birth. Being in the room and "cutting" the cord with all four. My life is changed each time. But I am kind of a weirdo. I do that hands on humming thing on the baby for months. They just come out. And we already know each other.

"What will come next

What happiness will lie".

Well written and moving.

Rinita Sen on January 07, 2019:

Beauty in the rhythm, the joy is felt.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on January 07, 2019:

How beautiful Caroline. A new life ready to begin is always exciting. All the best.

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