I can't seem to stop writing poetry or reading poetry. I think it is safe to say I love poetry and I love sharing great poetry with others.
94 Lines As Promised in a Dream
of our own
in a dream
what I've seen
lead based paint
in the dark
in a dream
© 2020 Jamie Lee Hamann
Jamie Lee Hamann (author) from Reno NV on April 21, 2020:
Thank you Brenda. I had to go back and reread the poem…(lol). Jamie
BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on April 20, 2020:
I really liked the reference to how our words are changed through translation.
Stay safe and keep writing.
Jamie Lee Hamann (author) from Reno NV on April 14, 2020:
Thank you Verlie.
Verlie Burroughs from Canada on April 13, 2020:
Wow, love the stream of consciousness in this dream journal. My dream poem was so different. Actually I've been really struggling with all the prompts. But it's good practice. Good stuff.
Jamie Lee Hamann (author) from Reno NV on April 03, 2020:
Thank you Bhatt and Romeos Quill. Jamie
Umesh Chandra Bhatt from Kharghar, Navi Mumbai, India on April 03, 2020:
Great composition and powerful lines. Nice work.
Romeos Quill from Lincolnshire, England on April 02, 2020:
Good cinematic work Jamie and thanks for your prayers. God bless you and your family.
Jamie Lee Hamann (author) from Reno NV on April 02, 2020:
Thank you all for stopping by for a read and leaving comments. I hope you all are well and I send my prayers. Jamie
Phyllis Doyle Burns from High desert of Nevada. on April 02, 2020:
Nice, Jamie. I like it.
Sankhajit Bhattacharjee from MILWAUKEE on April 01, 2020:
John Hansen from Queensland Australia on April 01, 2020:
This was great Jamie. One or two word lines really provides quite an impact. Well done.
Ruby Jean Richert from Southern Illinois on April 01, 2020:
This was so very different, like bullets firing at random. I loved it!
Ann Carr from SW England on April 01, 2020:
I love this too, Jamie. Great to see you again. I hope all is well with you and that you're keeping safe.
This brought forth so many images just like, as bill says, glimpses into the brain. The old postcard sets the scene too.
Is this your first of 30 for poetry month? Hope so!
Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on April 01, 2020:
Love it! A random trip through your brain, rapid-fire glimpses into a reality, or altered-reality, like those old newsreels that would flicker while they played...loved it!