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Is Your Relation-Ship Sailing Or Not?

Updated on October 31, 2017
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I am no poet, just a thrower of words. Still wandering what's life and why and how did I end up here?

In world's issues pool,

Relationship's shark eats big chunks of fish

Of all human business and not much spared

To write about something else.

However, one acute angle to save your relationship

Still resides in three signs to be sure of your relationship status.

Does your partner demand money?

Does your partner show insane quarrelling tendencies?

Your partner hides his or her Cell Phone's password.

If any of the signs is check marked Yes by you,

You are in Status Change Mode of relationship

From married to single, from divorced to available

You are a prankster, carry on the prank with life

But remember these three signs, that tell you all that matters

Whether to cling with the relation, or throw way like a juggler


© 2017 Kashif Ali Abbas

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      Kashif Ali Abbas 3 weeks ago from Pakistan

      Great People (Us) think Alike

      :)

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      Tamara Yancosky Moore 3 weeks ago from Uninhabited Regions

      I forgot to add: Oh! We both wrote about sharks, today!

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      Kashif Ali Abbas 3 weeks ago from Pakistan

      Thanks for your amazing and sweet feedback, relationships do bite at times, you are right. But, one has to move on, with chin up :)

      I feel that positive vibes of energy in your poems as well.

      Stay Happy and Blessed!

      K

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      Tamara Yancosky Moore 3 weeks ago from Uninhabited Regions

      Brilliant! You have put sound advice into a poem! And, such good advice, at that.

      I have been in a relationship with a Narcissist, and everything was upside down, and could not possibly be right-side up. And, I did not know if I was ‘coming or going’. I’m thankful that it is over. The Lord helped me, like always!

      I went to the link and look at the poem about 3 D’s, and it is very complex, and rather beyond my understanding as it is written (in poetic style). If it was plainly explained to me, then I could probably understand. Maybe I am over-complicating it as I have a tendency to do this much of the time :-)

      I am enjoying your poetry, imagery, expressions, and posts very much!

      Tamara xxx