16th Article: Neonate

I'm a creative writer, non-rhymer, storyteller, and author. I write free verse and narrative literary composition.

"My favorite
part is when
your eyes
twinkle; they
do it better
than the stars
at night,"
said to us by
our parents
when we were
still a neonate.

Comments

Franchesca (author) on February 10, 2021:

Oh, Brenda! Thanks! It could also be... How I wish! Haha!

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on February 09, 2021:

Awe...sweet.

I was hoping it was a lover's eyes.