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The Unwanted Villain

I discovered my passion for writing after I quit my day job. So I began to write fiction stories, self-help books, and articles, blogs, etc.

Pic: The Villain

Pic: The Villain

The girl was praying her night prayers before retiring to sleep. Peeping through the closed glass window was him watching.

He was the Villain of her life. About a year ago, he had come across her at his friend’s birthday party. He couldn’t take his eyes off her. But Yasmin didn’t show much interest in him. Nevertheless, he proposed to her through his friend. But the girl, Yasmin rejected him, thinking not to be her standard and wished to remain undisturbed.

Pic: Yasmin Near Her Home

Pic: Yasmin Near Her Home

Yasmin broke ties with his friend to be away from him. He couldn't communicate with her through his friend any longer and so split ties with him as well. His only interest remained in Yasmin.

He would always roam near about her home, hitting upon ideas and plans about how to hurt her. He couldn't accept that Yasmin dismissed him.

From the depth of sorrow, he would smoke excessively and get drunk.

He remained like that until he came back to his senses and formed further ideas and plans to destroy her peace of mind.

But it was a protected and secured place where Yasmin lived. And the Villain couldn't succeed in his evil plans.

The girl remained pious and true to God. She worked online from the comfort of her home. Gradually she earned a name for herself in the online community, which the Villain couldn't stand.

Pic: Yasmin Praying

Pic: Yasmin Praying

His question to God, ”How come she gets all the good name? I also deserve some of it!”

Well, Yasmin worked hard and loyally and believed in herself and God and therefore, her success.

The Villain, he had become, didn’t believe in himself, hardly prayed to God or recited the Holy Book. How would God reward him?

He too wanted to have a good name like Yasmin but God denied him. And therefore, he chose to be eviler.

He started to disturb her online and offline in every way he could. Yasmin hated him more than ever and didn’t want to have anything with him.

She wanted to lead an independent life. But the Villain entwined more with her, neglecting her wishes. He put her in a trap, which she believed only God could save and free her. She was in anticipation of that day.

Meanwhile, the Villain had lost his life many times and rebirthed and came to life many times.

Yasmin wondered how it was possible and how God let it happen. It really would have been good for her if he lost his life for good.

But God continued to rebirth him to struggle on, and he continued to pester her. The girl, on the other hand, persevered and went about doing the stuff she loved. God was Merciful to her but kept the Villain alive.

Yasmin continued to believe in herself. One day she would have everything in her way and continued to pray to God every day. She knew there were times God tested her. But she kept her faith in herself and God.

The Villain, on the other hand, lost his original features and was more like a phantom now, having lost his life and rebirthed several times.

Pic: The Villain Transformed into a Phantom

Pic: The Villain Transformed into a Phantom

Yasmin hadn't seen him for a long time, but he was in her vicinity wherever she went. She couldn't recognize him anyway. Now that the Villain was a phantom, he had become ghostly and could remain invisible whenever he wanted.

The area she lived in knew her problem. Although they couldn't free her from him, they took every precaution to keep her safe and secure.

They tried to bribe him with wealth and cash and forced him to leave her for good. But the villain was too adamant. He also wanted Yasmin. It was not obvious to everyone that he had lost his sanity as well.

Under these circumstances, no solution could be sought for Yasmin’s problem. But her region admired her for the person she was, and her sacredness was commended all the time.

The local people and Yasmin together believed the Villain would be defeated one day and would be lost from this world.

They believed, “The devil doesn’t stay overpowered for long, and the good will continue to survive and thrive.”

You, the reader may be wondering by now who the Villain is and where he exists.

Well, I remain near her home and watch over her 24/7. And I am the unwanted Villain.

Poll Time

© 2021 Rosina S Khan


Rosina S Khan (author) on January 08, 2021:

Yes, I hope the same for her. Thank you for your comment, Chrish.

Chrish Canosa from Manila Philippines on January 08, 2021:

I wish her stood vigorously 'till the end.

Have an awesome day out there!!

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, Lora, the villain is an evil spirit and a phantom. You are right in saying that she should form a strong spiritual connection to God, asking to terminate him. Hopefully, Yasmin will move on courageously and with goodness in anticipation of better days ahead.

Thank you for reading and I appreciate your insightful comments.

Lora Hollings on January 07, 2021:

This villain sounds like an evil spirit to me, Rosina. At first, I was going to say that she should go to the police to report him for stalking but then your story went on to say that he was a phantom. I think the only way that she can defeat him, is by remaining spiritually strong and asking for God's help in finally putting a permanent end to him! This is a scary story, Rosina, but I think that your heroine will prevail with her courage and her goodness.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

I am glad you enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for your comment, Osman.

Osman Ghazi on January 07, 2021:

I'm happy to read this

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

I guess so, Peggy. Hopefully, through prayers and believing in herself, Yasmin can get rid of the phantom and attain freedom. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Peggy Woods from Houston, Texas on January 07, 2021:

This reminds me of some of the stalkers that appear in some people's lives, which must be so scary. The fact of this one being a phantom makes it even scarier.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, Brenda, I agree with you. Yes, God will guide and protect her. She needs to believe in herself and God. Thank you for your generous comments.

BRENDA ARLEDGE from Washington Court House on January 07, 2021:


There are times in life we often wonder where God is??

Rest assured he is there but he works at his own time & pace.

He has a plan for each of if our lives.

He will protect & guide her along the way. She justs needs to believe & ask God to be with her everyday.

Take care.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, indeed, Denise, it is a scary story. Prayers can only help poor Yasmin. Hopefully she will be relieved of her problem. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Denise McGill from Fresno CA on January 07, 2021:

He is worse than a stalker having changed forms and become a phantom. How do you fight a phantom? This is a very scary story.



Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

I am glad you like the story, Chitrangada. I also hope Yasmin's good sense and faith guides her life path correctly. Thank you for reading and your insightful comments.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, Bill, that's the perfect ending to the story. I am glad you are happy with the ending you gave. Thank you for your comments.

Chitrangada Sharan from New Delhi, India on January 07, 2021:

Interesting and engaging story Rosina.

Sometimes, we do see such things happening around us. Even if the girl is not willing, the boy keeps troubling her. I believe their ego is hurt, to hear a no.

I just hope that her good sense and faith guides her correctly.

Thank you for sharing this.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

I am glad you like the story, Manatita. By rebirthing I meant multiplying asexually. Thank you for reading and your interesting comments.

Bill Holland from Olympia, WA on January 07, 2021:

Yasmin will endure and thrive. That's how I want this to end, and I'm happy there is no "next chapter," as I'm able to give it the ending I want for it. :)

manatita44 from london on January 07, 2021:

Lovely story! Some interesting bits about re-birthing which could be made clearer. The rogue is obviously persistent! Nice twist at the end.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, we should believe in ourselves and God and let the Universe work to give us the appropriate solution. How right you are, Fran! Thanks for your comments.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

There is no next chapter, Ankita. In the difficult situation Yasmin is, she just has to keep believing in herself and God until her prayers are answered. Thank you for reading and taking interest in my story.

fran rooks from Toledo, Ohio on January 07, 2021:

Rosina, interesting article. I think we must always keep the faith. I also believe we don't always get the answer from God we think we should. He does work in mysterious ways and we should always believe.

Ankita B on January 07, 2021:

God should answer her prayers and help her to get rid of that unwanted villain. I look forward to the next chapter to see how that happens. This is really a unique story.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, I think so too, John but let's have hope in the power of prayers. Thank you for reading, and I appreciate your comments.

John Hansen from Queensland Australia on January 07, 2021:

This was quite a different and unique story, Rosina. I don’t think the villain will give up easily, however.

Rosina S Khan (author) on January 07, 2021:

Yes, Yasmin is in a difficult situation and may God answer her prayers. Thanks for reading and your meaningful comments.

Pamela Oglesby from Sunny Florida on January 07, 2021:

That picture is so ugly I hated to look at it. I have no idea what Yamsin should do, but I hope God answers her prayers, Rosina.

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