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The Beast at Shooting Creek

Updated on October 9, 2017
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Gavin Johnson

Gavin Johnson was squatting behind a boulder, aiming. The rifle was cold against his cheek and he couldn't get a good bead on them. They were too difficult to make out in the shadows and his hands were shaking, still bleeding from the nails.

The moonlit trees glowed eerily, but it didn't help him see them any better. Gavin kept working his hands to fend off the bone chills and to make sure they were still movable. He had to keep his trigger-finger warm. Just that one had to work. He cinched the rags tighter against his palms. The bleeding seemed to stop for now.

They were laughing. Laying low in a makeshift lean-to. A large campfire roared out front. The fire kept casting shadows, wafting embers distracting him, and making it impossible to figure out where they were. Which lumps were bodies and which were bags of supplies. Gavin knew that they were all drunk inside. Probably all staring at the fire as well. Telling jokes. Eating.

Pretty stupid, he thought. Getting fire blinded like that. He couldn't see all four of them, but they had to be there. Flickering faces moved in and out of the dark lean-to, catching a bit of fire light, smiles dripping with his hooch. Liquor he’d found and they’d stolen, being wasted. Cans of meat lay piled in front. Salmon, Gavin saw.

Maybe he should just chance it. Just blast away. No, he thought again, I have to do this right. Can't chance it. It's not just about me.

The Slave

The girl was tied to stump about ten feet away. She was slumped over, nearly naked, streaked with grime, whimpering softly. Another causality in this post-apocalyptic hell. A common sex slave. Probably taken from some farm up this way or one of the hell cities from the valley.

Usually he'd find the girls dead, along the road, left like trash. Sometimes they were not complete. Used, not only for pleasure, but when it got bad, for food as well. For some reason, the women were used for this purpose -- these reasons -- more than the men. Children were a rarity these days.

It didn't matter, Gavin realized. She was their girl, until they were done with her. Until she was used up. Then they'd just cast her aside, dead. Maybe cook her up and eat her.

Gavin felt a new chill work into his gut. One he just couldn't let go. Not any longer, he told himself. It was time to take action and stop hiding. Stop surviving and start living again.

Surely they would be fire blinded by now, sitting there facing it like that, sipping his whiskey and eating his canned meat. Cans he'd collected. He'd found. Life-giving food.

Surviving, he thought again.

He could just walk right up. Shoot them slow. One at a time. He considered it for a moment, but changed his mind. I'm too cold. Not fast enough. I could miss. They would shoot back. Not a stupid hero.

They must be from one of the dead cities, Gavin thought. Maybe they had finally run out of people to kill and were moving to another city or town. Just passing through and he got caught up in their little web.

Shooting Creek

He should have moved in deeper. Should never had gone into Shooting Creek yesterday before sunset and talked to the drifter. The one with the quick eyes. The one who seemed nervous, edgy -- and smelled of rotten meat.

Then he wouldn’t be here tonight. Wouldn’t have to do this again. Wouldn’t need to kill people or die trying, Gavin thought.

But this time it was different. This time, they made this personal. It would not be about killing for survival, a shoot out in a ghost town between rival groups. This time it would be a cleansing.

Starvation, extermination, radiation, disease -- wasn't it enough? Enough dying? Weren't we on our way to extinction as it was?

He dismissed the thoughts. Even in all of this, some still needed killing. The bad seed had to go. New seed had to be planted.

“North Carolina, is that where this is?” That's what the weasel faced man -- the drifter -- with the quick eyes had asked him in Shooting Creek yesterday. His stinking breath made Gavin rub his nose.

“Yes, that’s where you are,” Gavin said. “Shooting Creek. Not much here.” That was a hint. It meant get out of my town, I found it first. But quick eyes was ignoring him and he didn't seem to be in a hurry.

It had been a few years since Gavin had seen anyone and it was distracting and welcoming at the same time, even if a bit peculiar. To actually talk with another human, wow. A treat.

Gavin was glad he still remembered how to talk. English anyway, but he'd picked up a little Korean as well, when some of their troops came through a few years back. A kind sergeant had taken pity on him. He had not revealed the underground pit where Gavin hidden for years. He had stayed and hunted with him, given him medicine when Gavin had almost died from the flu.

Then one day they shot him for abandoning his post and taken the deer he had killed. The next day they had pulled out, a line of tanks and armored cars, escorted by helicopters. They'd left his body in the street as they passed. A message to the troops.

Gavin had buried the kind sergeant nearby, after the army had retreated.

Weasel Face

“Whatcha name?” The weasel faced guy was too curious. Wasting time. Why? Gavin thought of his weapons in his bag slung over his shoulder. Did he have time to grab one?

“Gavin," he replied. His hairs started to stand on the back of his hand. Tingling. He shifted his gun bag. “You?” Gavin asked.

The weasel face just smirked. He didn't seem to have an answer. Small warning bells started to go off then, but Gavin didn’t listen. Just smiled and casually glanced around. His back was to the old flea market. The streets were quiet. He felt safe for the moment.

Then they spoke of other matters. The best way to get to Sky Valley. The stranger said that’s where he was headed. They spoke of good water. The weather. What travelers usually talked about, but something wasn’t right. He should have listened to his intuition. The tingling hairs on his arms.

Yet, the weasel faced guy was like one of those silver tongued car salesman of old. It made you feel bad to interrupt them.

“What did you say your name was?” Gavin asked again and paused.

The stranger kicked his boot into the gravel, ignored the question a second time.

Gavin was distracted by the drifter's boot again. Was that a nervous tick or something else, he wondered. Bits of gravel skittered away. He recognized it too late.

Grandpa

They descended on him like pack of rabid wolves. They’d been hiding next to a stall in the closed off flea market. It was quick. Boots in gravel and screaming.

Gavin reacted. He swung on the weasel face once and missed. Then one of them blindsided him with something hard across the back. It took his breath away and he fell forward into the gravel, grabbing handfuls of the sharp bits of it, pain coursing through him, breath refusing to come, gasping.

Gavin turned his head in time to see a shadow and a baseball bat. This time it was his thigh. More pain. He rolled onto his back, still trying to breathe in. Now he was open to attack and they obliged.

Punching and kicking now. Gavin counted four of them as they beat him. Surrounding him. He tried to open his bag, ignoring the pains, but it was pulled from his grasp. Now more kicking, but thankfully, less of the bat. One of them kicked him hard in the ribs and he breathed in for the first time.

Gavin faded and came back. He was crawling on his elbows trying to escape now. Almost automatically. Like a dying animal crawls to the curb after being run over by a car.

Too late. They dragged him back, shoved gravel into his mouth and screamed at him. One tried to ride him like horse. Things began to blur with blood, his mind telescoped inward, withdrawn now, into some blank survival mode.

Gavin yelled.

“Giddy up, Grandpa! Giddy up!” Then laughter. Boots to his groin now. White hot pain. "You're a bronco, Grandpa!" Stares. Entertainment for them, no doubt.

Gavin passed out.

Moments passed. They let him recover. The beating and kicking stopped. Gavin recovered his wits, waited for them to finish him off, but they were quiet now, just watching him. Ghouls of the post-apocalypse, waiting for what?

They looked grungy. Dirty. A mean group of killers and eaters, if Gavin ever saw any. Humankind's last repository of hatred.

“Fancy meeting someone out here,” weasel face said as Gavin came partly awake, head fuzzy, but his hearing was sharp. Gavin still could not focus. He wiped the blood from his eyes, held his sore ribs, and sat up with a sharp pain in his spine.

Words spun through air. Who was he. Where did he live. Where there more? Where their girls?

Sumo

He must have passed out again. But one voice shattered that black bliss.

“Where’s the water old man!” It was the big one. He looked like a cross between a baby elephant and sumo wrestler, with the face of a gorilla. But had the soprano of prepubescent choir boy.

It confused Gavin for a moment and that earned him swift kick to the ribs from the gorilla, yet again. Gavin folded to the gravel once more, head now throbbing. He wasn't imagining it, the gorilla had a childlike voice. Almost squeaky.

“Jeez, this old cat was loaded. Look at this,” the skinny one said. He was holding up three revolvers. “A Ruger, a Colt and...what the hell is a Stechkin? Russian? All full of bullets too! Where did you get bullets old man?” Skinny's mouth was agape. Teeth yellow and caked with something red and fleshy.

Skinny kicked Gavin in the leg. Gavin grunted in pain again. Rolled away. Skinny laughed, spun the wheel guns. “Damn, I haven’t seen one of these in years -- a working one anyways. All shiny too."

Flea Market

“Water, old man. Where is it?” The first one was talking. Weasel face. He’d appeared like a ghost when Gavin rounded the old flea market with a box of canned meat and three bottles of whiskey and his guns -- deep in a bag where he couldn't get to them. A dumb mistake.

Gavin had been about to cross the highway to hide his stash at the church, one of his hiding spots. Should’ve stayed in back until night, he thought. Shouldn't waited in the church until then. Getting too brazen these days. Too damned cocky. Striking up conversations with drifters who materialize from the shadows. Only these were worse than drifters.

Gavin didn’t talk and they eventually hit him too hard. A thump from the bat again. Merciful blackness.

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Awake

The buzzing in his own head woke him. Gavin was in the church, his church, his hiding spot, tied with ropes to a pew. His sides were bruised, caked blood on his forehead where he'd been hit with the baseball bat. His lips were swollen and one eye was nearly closed. The other eye was clear, but achy as hell.

There was also a new pain, as if he needed more. Both of his arms were stretched out, spread eagle fashion, and each hand was nailed to the pew. He couldn't move his feet, but could feel that they were also attached to the wooden floor. He suspected more nails there, through his boots, but there was no pain there. Just numbness.

Gavin glanced outside to see that the flea market across the street was on fire. Red hot ashes were floating down near the window. The night sky now aglow with a fire that might attract others, if there were more about.

Gavin turned at the shuffle of shoes. Boots tapping on the wooden church floor.

Behind the pulpit stood the sumo wrestler guy, smacking the butt of knife in his palm like he was trying to make up his mind. A gorilla with a smirk, black teeth, a shirt stained with gore under a ski jacket marked with peace signs, as if a child had scrawled all over it in a fit of anger. A scraggly beard, long brown dreadlocks over pale baby-white skin clashed with his white leather slacks, tied at his oversized waist with a string of red bikini thongs. If anything, this guy -- this gorilla of man -- was the epitome of terror and hell in this new frontier.

Gavin wondered if the bikini belt was some sort of badge of conquest -- women he had killed an eaten.

It was growing dark outside now and they had lit the candles behind the cross. Jesus was looking rather eerie in the semi-darkness, his arms also outstretched, nailed hands, his face now a grimace in the flickering lights, as if he knew something.

Gavin felt His damnation then. Knew what he had to do, if he survived, but he would. He had already made up his mind. That grimace from the shadowy cross was his message. His order live. His mandate.

The glow of the out-of-control flea market fire was threatening to cross the street and engulf the church. Then it seemed to calm. A condition the gorilla man did not appear to appreciate.

Good Water

“You’re awake?” the gorilla said. He lowered his head. “Your eyes are open, I think." He leaned down, looked at Gavin. "Thanks for the guns, dude.”

“Uh huh.” Gavin responded. He stretched his neck, tried to work out a kink, but couldn't. His head throbbed. Gavin’s eyes adjusted to the faint light. "What is on my head?"

“Sorry about that,” the gorilla said. “My guys get a little mad when they don’t get a straight answer. They gave you a hat of barbed wire, you know, on account of our Lord Buddy over there." The gorilla waved in the general direction of Jesus and bellowed with laughter.

Gavin looked around the church, but couldn't see the others.

"Do you like my touch?" The gorilla spread his arms.

"Ah," Gavin said. "The nails. Nice touch." The pain seemed to lessen now, almost as if a sense of calm had come over him.

"Well," gorilla said, "I try!" He paused, slapped the pulpit where he was standing, "but my grand finale seems to be a screw up." He nodded at the fire. "I'd hoped it would cross the street -- catch the trees on fire, burn you in your pew! Hey, at least you had a seat at the end of the world -- look at Jesus -- he had to stand!" More laughter and a grunt. He took a swig of liquor from a bottle he had hidden behind the pulpit.

“I won’t tell you about the water,” Gavin spat blood onto the floor. “You can find plenty on your own.” His head wound started to bleed again. The barbwire crown was finding new flesh to rip.

The gorilla walked over, still tapping his knife. Gavin looked around, but the others were not visible. Gorilla held the knife to his rib. "I forgot one thing." He jabbed.

More pain in his side -- his ribs. The gorilla withdrew the knife. Gavin didn't flinch. "I think you were suppose to do that after I was dead."

"Huh?" A moment of confusion as the gorilla wiped the knife on his white leather slacks. "You got lucky, I guess!" Insane laughter, followed by low chuckles and that punctuating grunt. "I stuck you early!"

The gorilla looked at his handy work. "Man, you sure are a bleeder!"

"I have no water..." Gavin whispered through his pain.

Gorilla leaned it. “We can find a lot of water, old man, but I want clean water, not the irradiated crap that makes you go bald and impotent. I have a lot of breeding to do! Too many first born sons to host my new world! I don't want deformed kids man!"

Gavin coughed. “Find a mountain stream, look for a well…”

The Stash

“Shut up!” the gorilla guy backhanded Gavin. Sparks danced in the air, like a dense cloud of miniature bees over a fire, just in front of his bleeding nose. Then they faded. Only the ringing in his ears remained.

“Now you see what you did? You made me punish you. I hate punishing, but that's a lie isn't it? I love to punish. It's just...it's just great fun!"

He pointed at the fire. "Water or I'll leave you here to cook."

“Stuff?” Gavin asked. He winced, sniffled, then sneezed. A mist of watery blood sprayed the pew in front of him.

“That’s gross old man.” The gorilla guy scrunched up his fleshy face. "Here!" A rag soaked in vodka was shoved into face. Gavin did not react. Just stared at his tormentor, calmly. It seemed to unnerve the gorilla.

“I don’t just want your water, old man. You know that." He wiped over Gavin's eyes. Waited. But Gavin refused to react, no matter how much his eyes were burning now.

"I want your stash man. Not just this little bit of canned meat and cheap whisky? In a church? No man I want it all! Where are you holed up? Let’s make this quick.” He raised his hand, then changed his mind. He lowered it. “Naw, you knock out too easy and I ain’t got all night.”

Scars

The recent memory of that incident made Gavin trace the healing knife scar along his forehead. He was still hunched behind the boulder waiting for them to pass-out in the lean-to, but the big one, the gorilla one, was bellowing now, telling story after story.

How he killed this guy. Used bungee cords on this other woman, to strangle her. Laughter.

How he once raped a girl. Many girls, for his first born sons.

Then how he had tied one broad to a tree and when they came back from scavenging in the valley with his last gang, how he discovered that something had eaten most of her.

How he had reacted to that loss, by killing his gang while they slept with this knife. He held it up. The others said nothing.

It was an unending tale of conquest, lust, booze, survival of the meanest and abject cruelty -- by men who had traded civilization for insanity. And more insanely, how they all collected bikini thongs as a sign of sons to come. As a sign of gorilla's new world order.

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A Carving

He had tracked them over the mountain last night, keeping low and out of sight and spent most of the time in the river, water up to his navel. His legs still ached from the chill of it, but it had made his feet feel better.

Gavin had not dared to remove his boots. If they were full of water or blood, it did not matter now, because they were past feeling anyway.

Then he was belly down in the dirt and gravel, working his way to the ridge, just above them, still thinking about how he was going to do this.

“You know,” the gorilla guy had said, when they were still back in the church and Gavin was tied and nailed to the pew, “I’ll give it to you old jerk, you done pretty good.”

Gorilla was carving something in the pulpit then. Bits of wood flaked away as he worked. Then he glanced at the blade. It still had Gavin's blood on it. The gorilla man sniffed it and then did worse. He licked.

Gavin kept silent, but inside, his humanity roiled. He let his eyes play over the cross in the small church again. Jesus seemed to be crying now. This had to end, Gavin thought. These men, this abomination, it had to die.

Inwardly, Gavin apologized to Jesus. For what I am about to do, do not forgive me Lord.

Nothing

“But you and I know we're in a world of nothing now,” gorilla had said. “Nothing at all. Just dead cities, roving gangs, no rules any longer. No cops. Hell, no nothing.” He chuckled to himself. “My kinda place!”

Gavin said nothing. He heard the others now. They were in a side office and someone else was with them. Sobbing. It was a girl.

“Waddaya think old man?” the gorilla asked. “Don’t mind them, they are just relieving some stress.” He laughed. "I'm already relieved!"

“Think about what?” Gavin asked. He was distracted by the girl’s crying now. It was getting under his skin in the worst way.

"Maggy! Maggy!" they were teasing. "You're such a hussy!" One of them was giggling, slurring his words. "You'd better do as I say..." Screams.

A Knife

The gorilla had been distracted by his gang, but he edged closer. Pointed his knife. “Watch your lips old man or I’ll saw them off!” Then he smiled, stuck his tongue out, worked it around his cheek, retreated and began to stab his knife in the pulpit again. He calmed.

“What is going on out there?” he asked.

Gavin hesitated. “In the world, you mean?”

“Yes. Are we still under attack? Was their a freaking zombie apocalypse? What the hell is going on?” Gorilla guy jammed his knife in the pulpit this time. It stayed there, vibrating.

“I’m not sure.” Gavin stared at the cross behind the pulpit. “I don’t think anybody knows for sure.”

“What?” Gorilla guy stared in disgust. “Nobody knows?”

Gavin shrugged.

Gorilla guy yanked his knife out of the pulpit. Dusted it off. “Screw you old man. We were attacked. That’s what happened and people like you did nothing so we ended up like this.”

Gorilla guy then jumped off of the steps, leaned his face in close. His breath smelled of rotting teeth, booze and tobacco. “I ought to cut you up and leave you out in that street and watch what happens…” He drew back.

The slice across the forehead was unexpected. Immediately Gavin began to bleed profusely, momentarily blinding him. He blinked it away. Hoped it would stop.

The Girl

The girl in the side office screamed.

“Jesus,” the gorilla guy said as he turned. “I told you guys to save her!” He dashed side office door, yanked it open, hurled himself inside. A scuffle and yelling.

Gavin felt that his ankle was loose. He pulled his boots upward and felt the nail there remain fixed to the floor. He pulled again, with more effort, felt a pop and his boots were free. He took a breath. There was hot pain in toes.

Next he worked his left hand free, over the nail there. Fresh blood oozed, but did not gush out. Quickly, he worked his right hand free. Same scenario. The blood only oozed. Next he worked the elbows, where they had strapped, but had not knotted them over the pew.

Seconds ticked by. The gorilla was still hollering at his gang. Throwing things. Making threats. But he had remained in the side office.

The ropes fell away now. They had been careless. The nails should have held him, but Gavin had been desperate. He didn't look at the nails. Did not want to know what was torn away.

Gorilla guy continued yelling at his gang. “I told you,” he yelled. “We keep this one for now!" A pause. "Gimme that you idiot!" The high pitched voice seemed to boom in the office.

Gavin began to stand and still, gorilla guy was banging around in the side office. “Fix her up. Stop using those damned things on her. Look at her. We need her till the next one.”

Gavin looked around, but could not see his guns. No bags. They must have them with them in the office. He was prayed. Just a few more seconds. Time to go now, he coached his feet. He wobbled to the front doors.

Run

“But you said…” It was one of them arguing.

“I don’t care what I said!” the gorilla guy bellowed. “Clean her up! If we could grab another then you can play I said.” Then, quiet sobbing.

“Have you seen any babes since we came up in these mountains, you idiots?"

Silence, then, “Can we just take care of the old man and roll, I’m tired of this place. No action.” Footsteps then.

Gavin was still wobbling toward the entrance, holding his head, trying to stop the bleeding. He made it to the front doors. Felt the heat of the fire across the street as he opened them. He took one last look at the cross. Jesus seemed lost in the darkness now.

Gavin pushed through the smoke. Started to run, the roar of the fire helping to mask his own sounds. He made it to the house next door in a half crouch. The pain was tolerable.

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It was dark, nearly moonless. He kept running. Into the woods. It was blacker in here. Up a hill. He passed yet another home. Also abandoned, unlit. Windows broken. Birds’ nests in the corners of the eve.

Gavin's heart pounded. Felt like it was ricocheting off of his lungs. He ran again.

Then he heard them yelling. Gunfire. More hollering. But they weren’t coming his way. They had no idea which way he went. The yelling faded as he ran farther.

He didn’t stop running until he reached the foothills and began to climb Arch Ridge. He’d lost them.

But then he did something he never thought he’d do again. He stopped.

Gavin was empty inside now. Safe, bleeding, probably dying, but empty. He began to circle back. Worried. Worried about what would happen if he didn't at least try. If he was dying, then maybe it could change something. He could trade the rest of his time for someone else's time. Why the hell not?

The girl, Maggy, he thought. It was always something. Something that needed doing. And besides, they, the thugs, might be a problem in the future. It was there time. Forgive me, he said to himself then. Screw them though.

Gavin broke into boarded up home on the way back down. Busted in the big bay window, climbed in, scraping already sore ribs on the frame. He didn’t know the residents in this town. Had never been here before the end times. But it was on his list of small towns to check for supplies, and people. That's how he'd ended up here.

Using sheets from a bed, Gavin dealt with his knife wounds in his side and head. He wrapped his hands as well. Found an extra coat and pulled that on. Used bottled water to clean his face of blood, but he felt he was wasting too much time. One eye was still sealed shut. The other would have to do, blurry or not.

Then he searched the home for guns. Found a gun case. Felt it, more than saw it. As he had often discovered, it was rare not to find guns in small town homes.

The former residents had taken time to board them up, thinking they’d be back in a week or so, but hadn’t always taken their weapons. Or if they had, ammo was often left behind. Stray bullets in a cupboard, shotgun shells in a closet, forgotten, gathering dust.

He lowered his head. The residents had never seen it coming. Never understood that they were being systematically exterminated. Marched to the camps never to return.

Later, at least in the big cities, before everything descended into chaos, the various military groups, began remove the guns and other valuables, from the abandoned homes. It was as if everyone had prepared their homes for a storm, only to be shuffled peacefully, into the belly of the actual beast. A revelation they had learned too late.

Gavin loaded the rifle he’d found. Put the shotgun located in the garage, in a laundry sack with four boxes of extra shells. Then he moved. It was critical, he thought, to do this at night. Right now. Get them scared.

Chasing the Moon

It hadn’t worked out, however. They were gone. The church was empty.

Out of curiosity he went to the pulpit. There, carved into the oak, was a symbol. A peace symbol. He moved the bible over the scar, nodded to the cross behind him, put out the candles and made his way out the side door.

This is pure insanity, he thought. Then he looked at Jesus again. Still on his cross, but no longer whole. The glowing flames from the fire across the street revealed it. They had desecrated him. Removed his head, chopped off his hands and in the ultimate act of sacrilege, they had burned his crotch. The embers still glowed there.

The fire across the street had calmed. The church was safe, except for its Jesus.

Gavin shook his head. Why had this bothered him so? He was not religious in the least, but others in this town had been. Others had come here. They had gathered here, as a community. Lived and died here.

He limped to the doors, pushed through and on a hunch, took a right.

He picked up their trail by the girl's screams. They hadn’t gone far. He followed at a distance, keeping out of the moonlight. They were strung out in a loose line. One was way back, so Gavin kept on him. It looked like the weasel faced guy, but it was hard to tell.

A few hours later they turned into the mountains. Shuffled up between the trees, but not in any hurry. It wasn’t long before they decided to bed down. Why they chose a lean-to, rather than an abandoned house didn’t fit. There were houses scattered about, but houses were iffy at night. A place in the middle of the forest?

Maybe they were trying to get over the mountain tonight and thought a hunter’s blind was a good as anything.

When the laughter started, Gavin knew it wouldn’t be long. They were into the whiskey. No doubt about it. These guys like to stay drunk. No doubt if they had something stronger, they'd be doing that as well.

He worked his way to the ridge, after hiding behind the boulder. He wasn’t noticed. Gavin located a good spot between a rockfall and the scree. Brought his rifle up and adjusted his scope. Five rounds, he thought. I can’t miss. How many yards? Maybe a fifty?

Gavin's hands ached where the nails had been. The wounds were reopening.

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Gavin checked on the girl. If the gang hadn’t noticed him, she had. There was an uncomfortable moment in the moonlight when he realized that she was staring right at him, holding her fist in the air, shaking it.

He couldn’t make out what she wanted. Then she turned and watched her captors. Face glowing in the dying campfire. She knew. She wanted them to die.

The big one had finally passed out. The bottle held tightly to his chest. Even in sleep he was worried about the others. He had one of Gavin’s revolvers in the other hand.

The other three were apparently comatose.

Damnation

Gavin put the red dot on the big man’s belly first. The girl reacted by looking away, holding her ears.

He slowly pulled the trigger, but his finger froze. He pressed his other hand against it, slowly, keeping aim. There was no kick, but the report was a peal of thunder in the quiet forest. Gavin aimed again.

The gorilla had not moved. He had died in his sleep. To bad, Gavin thought now.

It seemed to take a few seconds for the others to understand. By the time the one nearest to the big one rubbed his eyes, Gavin shot him through the chest. He flopped over, dead.

Two more.

Now panic set in. Gavin tried to put the red dot on the one on the end, but he was moving toward the back.Hollering at the other one. He switched to weasel face, who was desperately searching for something in his sleeping bag.

The next shot rang out. Weasel face fell backward, holding a revolver. His dead finger pulled the trigger once. The shot went wild.

Now Gavin's hand refused to work. He switched to his left. Used his middle finger.

One left. Gavin looked into the lean-to, but the rifle scope had fogged over. If the last guy was there, he was tucked into the corner and he couldn’t see him. Had he escaped?

Gavin looked at the girl. She was facing the lean-to now. No, she was nodding at it. A specific part of it. Then she pointed. Gavin aimed at a pile of bags.

He had two shots left. Maybe the last guy would go for the revolver in weasel face’s hand. Maybe he had one already. Gavin waited.

Suddenly, the girl moved back. Her chains stopped her and she fell. A shot rang out. She screamed. “You missed, you bas..." She screamed.

Gavin aimed at the back corner and fired. Immediately, the last man launched himself toward the girl, but tripped in the fire and rolled. Gavin tried to get a bead on him, but he scrambled up went for the girl again, pointing his gun at her. She screamed again, held up her chained hands -- then it looked as if she was throwing something. Sand? Dirt?

The man’s hands went to his face. He stumbled. Caught himself on one knee. Tried to rise, gun still in his hand. He started to fire wildly.

The girl dove to the ground. Bullets sung over Gavin's head. The last man began to curse and slur, still in a drunken crazed stupor.

Gavin's round caught the last man in the back and knocked him forward. He was almost up and had twisted away. Unfortunately, his attempt to rise and the resulting strike from the bullet knocked him off balance. He landed on the fire. His body lay still, as ribbons of blue flames engulfed him.

The girl was standing now. Waiting. She was looking nervously at the bodies.

Gavin worked his way down to her. Once there, he released her from her chains after finding a key in the fat one’s pocket.

“They are all dead,” Gavin said.

“Thanks,” she said. “If it wasn’t for you, I’d…”

“Don’t worry about it,” Gavin said. Then he thought better it. He slung his rifle over his shoulder. "Thing is if I hadn’t made the mistake of going into town yesterday afternoon, like an idiot, well...I guess some mistakes are good ones…”

Gavin started to limp away.

She walked over, after finding a jacket from one of the bags, put her shoulder under his arm and said, "they were fire blinded."

"In more ways than one," Gavin said.

They slowly made their way down the mountain as the sun began to rise orange and fiery over the smoky ridges.

"Where are we going?" Maggy asked.

"I don't know," Gavin replied. "But we'll know when we get there."

© 2017 Jack Shorebird

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      Larry Rankin 10 months ago from Oklahoma

      Very good suspense.

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      Jack Shorebird 10 months ago from Southeastern U.S.

      Thanks again, RoadMonkey.

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      RoadMonkey 10 months ago

      Good one, kept it tense right to the end, and believable!