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The Carriage Driver³ - Seven Cities of Heaven

Updated on April 1, 2017

Andrew, the ancient traveler, sat, lotus style, hidden from the world by the embracing arms of the weeping willow. Paths crisscrossed the tree heading in all the directions of the universe. If people on the path needed energy, they received it from the air around them. If the people passing by had more than enough energy, they left some in the air for others. That is the way it has always been. That is the way it will always be. An abundant universe was preparing souls for their many journeys. The universe knew, the more that was shared, the more there was to be shared.

In the early hours of the morning, many walked though the Commons, in Boston. They drew energy from the universe, and were better for it. The sight of the tree, made them walk taller, smile wider and feel more joy.

Captain Griffin Chaffey stood in his stable polishing his carriage. Nuelle had been brushed, her coat, bright and fresh. Her mane was combed and trimmed. Her hoofs smoothed and waxed. He took time to share an apple with Nuelle, at this early hour. His destination, this morning was Mass General. The name in the book was of a child.

Levi delivered smiles all over the ward. If asked about it, he would say, “They are free. And they always come back.” At 6:02 Levi delivered his last smile.

At the curb, outside Mass General, Nuelle and Griffin waited. They were in no hurry. Griffin had never understood the taking of the life of a child. Somehow that did not fit well with his concept of the universe.

Levi walked through the front door and down the steps towards the waiting carriage. At the bottom of the steps he turned and waved goodbye to the friends he had made there and hoped to see some of them when it was time.

Griffin stepped down and waited. When Levi arrived at the steps, Griffin greeted him. He extended his hand and Levi stepped inside the carriage.

“Do you know where you want to go?” Griffin asked.

Levi, put his small hand under his chin and thought a minute. “I heard once that there are seven cities in heaven. Is that right?”

“I have not heard that.” Griffin paused. “But maybe, I know someone that has.” Griffin gave Nuelle her signal.

She stepped away from the curb and headed over to the Commons. It was a perfect spring morning and besides it was one of her favorite passageways on towards the destinations of eternity.

Once in the park, there was an atmosphere of exuberance and carefree abandon. Laughter wafts through the branches of the trees and mingled with the melody of mockingbirds. The carriage wheels provided the chorus.

Levi’s eyes took it all in. The joy and warmth, in the air filled him. As much as the hospital tried, joy and warmth escaped them. He looked around there were more smiles than he had seen in the last six months.

The bump of Nuelle pulling the carriage off the path made Levi look forward. He leaned up to ask Griffin what happened. That is when he saw the weeping willow. Nuelle was walking right towards it. Then to Levi’s surprise, Nuelle walked right through the branches.

Instantly, the light changed. The shadows of the leaves danced along Nuelle’s white coat and a marionette theater began to play out for the amusement of Levi.

“Are we here?” Levi asked and he jumped down out of the carriage.

Griffin climbed down and stood next to Levi, whose attention drifted back and forth from the shadow play on Nuelle’s side and the ancient one sitting cross legged beneath the branches of the willow tree.

“Are we here?” Levi asked again.

“That man has traveled the universe for a lot longer than I have. He may be able to give you the answer you seek.”

Levi walked over to the ancient one. As was his custom, he offered a smile. Then he looked at the way the man sat on the ground and sat down and crossed his legs, ‘Indian style’ as his mother would say.

Andrew repaid the smile, and asked “What is your question?” Andrew glanced over to Griffin, who shrugged his shoulders in amusement.

“I heard that there are seven cities in heaven and I want to know if it is true and if it is true which one is right for me.”

Andrew, “Where did you hear about the seven cities?” Andrew, who had satisfied all his curiosity years ago asked.

“I read it in a comic book.” Levi told him.

Without hesitation, Andrew responded, “Then it must be true.” He paused, “Did it tell you anything else?”

“I am trying to find out more. I don’t want to go to the wrong city.”

Andrew pointed off in the distance, directly over Levi’s shoulder. “In that direction is the seventh city of heaven. Many of our younger candidates find it a place to continue their natural curiosity about the universe. There are guides there that will teach about music and how music can make your soul more fulfilled. There is a richness to it that can keep that beautiful smile of yours bright.”

“I like music.” Levi admitted.

“There are also guides who will bring you through the great halls filled with the arts. There are colors there that you have never seen before. Many a traveler spends time in the great halls of art. Art is the history of our collective souls. Beware any group opposed to the arts.” Andrew shifted he wrapped his arm around his knee and leaned forward. “I see an explorer in you. Right outside the seventh city, there is a great wilderness. Many animals, not seen for centuries can be seen there roaming free. A boy of your age might find going on safari an interesting way to spend a hundred years.” Andrew leaned back and smiled.

“You can discover the great civilizations. Those that are different from what is found here on this astral plane. There are outlying places where the citizens all wear silk garments of the finest quality. The colors and patterns are so magnificent that each person is a walking work of art. You can find yourself amidst a kaleidoscope of smiling colors.”

Andrew continued, “I spent a good deal of time in the seventh city of heaven. It is the place where the writers and the poets go for inspiration. It is a place where many a writer on this astral plane go in their dreams, and bring back bits and pieces of a place that they want to share with those that share their smiles. I don’t think you can go wrong starting this portion of your journey at the seventh city.”

Griffin stood by Nuelle taking in the scene. The shadows and light that make up this kingdom of the ancient traveler is a mere dome of branches and leaves, but is held in the same esteem as a cathedral with spires that reach to heaven. “Whenever you are ready,” he called to Levi. “Did you find the information you were seeking?”

Levi sat before the ancient traveler. He wondered how people got to be so old. He wondered about the other cities that the ancient one did not speak of. And told himself to try and reach all of them. He felt ready for the next portion of his journey and wondered if some day he would be sitting beneath the branches of a willow tree with Griffin and Nuelle, and helping a novice on their way to the stars, or at least the seven cities of heaven.

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      Maria Jordan 4 weeks ago from Jeffersonville PA

      I was hoping for an episode to be published before I headed out for the afternoon.

      "The universe knew, the more that was shared, the more there was to be shared." I'm grateful sweet Levi was flooded by the same smiles he so generously gave in his short life.

      I wonder if you know who I can get in touch with to reserve spots in the 7th city...sounds perfect for all of our writing circle.

      If the music you've selected this week is an idea of what to expect, I'm certain I'd like to start my next journey there - but wait...

      I wonder what the story is behind the other six cities (pretend you hear me clearing my throat at this tall order of a hint...)

      TGIF and thanks for a beautiful read. Hugs, mar

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      Randi Benlulu 4 weeks ago from Mesa, AZ

      It's been a long time since I've read a carraige driver story. Not only was it worth the wait but makes me seriously question how I've missed so many.! What a sweet story! Thank you!

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      mckbirdbks 4 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello mar. Along about when I was finishing up, I thought someone was going to wonder about the other six cities. And here you are. I went off in search of happy music. On an episode of Bill Mahr (sp) he mentions Cuba one of the poorer nations and played a happy music clip, then he played a music clip of the wealthiest nation on earth (depending what you count) and it is a gothic terror screaming tirade. So, I stole the thought and used it here. Thanks for your visit before you head out on this warm and pleasant Friday.

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      mckbirdbks 4 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Randi – What a nice surprise this morning. The series has bounced all over the place. You picked a more traditional carriage driver story to visit. Thank you.

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      Martie Coetser 4 weeks ago from South Africa

      Discovering those great civilizations will be so interesting. I wonder what cities are those seven in heaven? Thanks for another delightful episode of the Carriage Driver :))

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      Peg Cole 4 weeks ago from Dallas, Texas

      I love the imagination with which you've taken this tale to new places. Although the passing of Levi was sad, his next journey is sure to be amazing. Thanks for another enjoyable adventure into the next life. The wondrous mysteries and knowledge of the universe await under the willow tree. Listening to the music now.

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      Bill Holland 3 weeks ago from Olympia, WA

      If there are seven cities then I figure that increases my chance of actually entering one, right? If for no other reason I thank you for this story just for making me feel like I might win the afterlife lotto.

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      Shyron E Shenko 3 weeks ago from Texas

      Fantastic, you must have visited that city in you dreams before each of the episodes you share with us, maybe you can describe all the cities.

      I am with Maria I want to be next to her in the seventh city.

      Blessings always

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Martie – Wouldn’t it be nice to wander through the streets of an ancient civilization. Or maybe I can just wander the streets of America, a country with no civilization.

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Peg – Thank you. It has become more than difficult to think of new destinations. This was likely a combination of different locations, remixed. I guess I should have read more comic books as a kid. I appreciate your visit.

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Bill – That is a good thought. I wish it would have occurred to me. Yes, no I have seven chances to get into heaven. (Not that that will be enough.) You get to the gate, and begin telling a story. A redo of one thousand and one nights.

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Shy – The Seventh City does sound like a wondrous place. With all our HP family there, it will be an adventure that we will all write about. I appreciate your visit and support of this series. Thank you for the blessings.

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      Genna East 3 weeks ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I love how your imagination in this series opens up new vistas and possibilities...they are endless, beautiful and inspiring. To drift back in time with the ancients -- now there is a travel dream worth taking! Wonderful writing, Mike.

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Genna – Thank you. This was an excursion for sure. Once the first sentence formulated itself, the rest went very smooth. The variations of the where and what are intriguing to think about. I appreciate you staying with these stories. It has been a long road.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

      A most delightful and heartwarming story. Oh, I do hope there are those cities. Wonderful story telling took me right to that ancient one and I too sat there under that willow tree.

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      mckbirdbks 3 weeks ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Gypsy Rose Lee - Thank you for such a kind comment. This series has gone off in many directions. I appreciate your visit.

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