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Take It Away, All Away

Updated on September 18, 2017
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Israel is a fan of many types of music and loves to write, not in any particular order and does them usually at the same time.

Struggling in a vast sea of emptiness,

The mind swirling in a vortex of chaos,

I sit, I wonder, I ponder,

Soul withering away with unending horror,

Eyes that bleed from terror,

Heart anguishing from the carnage,

Time standing still, yet everything a blur,

The body trembles ever so violently,

Take it away, all away...


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      Israel Mercado 2 months ago


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      So expressive the emotions just shine through. Life is that way as long as we keep to our faith there is always hope.

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      Israel Mercado 2 months ago

      I totally agree!

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      Louise Powles 2 months ago from Norfolk, England

      Sometimes life can be an empty and scary place, but there is always light at the end.