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Pulse Rate- The Throbbing Words of Soul

Updated on April 26, 2017

Pulse- the words of heart

The language of heart,

the throbbing word,

the tender fluctuations,

the rhythm heard.


The redolent flashback,

smelling strong,

redouble comeback,

like oscillating gong.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thank you Tamara for your wonderful comment.

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      Tamara Moore 6 months ago

      Powerful and passionate!

      Hugs,

      Tamara

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thank you Hari.

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      Hari Prasad S 6 months ago from Bangalore

      Excellent.

      - hari

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thanks Audrey ..it is very kind of you.

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      Audrey Howitt 6 months ago from California

      This really does have a strong sense of pulse--great write!

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thank you Bill sir for your kind words.

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      Bill Holland 6 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Jamie is correct, this poem has the rhythm of a heartbeat...very well written.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thank you Louise and ThreeKeys for your wonderful comments.

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      Threekeys 6 months ago from Australia

      Life and our realities. The heart is our heart brain for sure. Thankyou Debangee.

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      Louise Powles 6 months ago from Norfolk, England

      That's a lovely poem. I love how you've written that.

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      DEBANGEE MANDAL 6 months ago from India

      Thank you Manatita and Jamie for your kind words.

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      manatita44 6 months ago from london

      Nice. Mostly physically related though a nice metaphor of the Soul. The poetry itself is unique.

      The psychic Heart has a different beat and a perennial music. Indeed it is from this Heart of Hearts that your poetry of Silence and oscillations arise. Noble effort.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 6 months ago from Reno NV

      Your poems reads like a heart beating. Well done. Jamie